hi all,

See no evil, hear no evil ,speak no evil...

feell free to write any suggestions ...

plz score & critique my design ...

I like the design alot. Very clean and graphic. But, I think the concept would be more easily understood if the skulls were each different. The "speak no evil" also does not communicate. It is hard to tell what the object is in front of his mouth. I like the clean look, but you may want to focus on another concept. The See no evil, hear no evil ,speak no evil has been a little overdone. Keep it up though.



Feel free to critique my designs.

I think its better this way ...

Love the illustration, really clean, bold and graphic.



Took me a couple of looks to realise what was infront of the mouth on the last, but if you fix this I think its done, and you def have to submit it!



Just an idea, but maybe a shattered jaw?



Really cool.

thnks ... the lower jaw is slightly shattered ... i 'll try to make it more obvious ..

this might not be what you want, but I will say it just in case it will help. Maybe you can add a little bit of red to each skull, in the form of blood, but really subtle-like.

I love skull designs, so this is obviously my kind of shirt.

Good luck. comment on mine?

Blondedesign is right the style is gnarly as, but id remove the axe, and replace it with a completely shattered jaw, seperated, teeth knocked out etc, would be more obvious.





Flaaamingo

Yeah remove the axe i thought it was a lollipop or something first...Personaly I like skulls, but from what I gather Threadless isn't super fond of them...so taking that into account I'd try a give the skulls a unique charecter that stands out from other skulls. Looks clean though.



feel free to crit mine!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/38224/ZombieMan

ACROSS

UP

ACROSS

UP

ACROSS

you should consider making some changes to the skulls, so they aren't so copy paste.

I like the style, I think the ax should be firmly in the jaw, horizontal, it looks odd now.

STUPID

The design is really nice and clean. I think you should definitly submit this :)

yeah put the axe on top of the skull and add some cracks.. :)



please help me with these critiques:

http://www.threadless.com/profile/911514/Pixelweltenbummler/critiques

thnks all for ur helpful comments ...

i thought i might change the theme just a little bit ...

which one is better "2" or "3"...?

The drawing looks good. I would agree with what others have said about the ax on the last one.



One thing to consider is color use. It's a fairly striking design (up and down is definitely the way to go), but the users on this site are unlikely to be impressed with plain white on black. Making the skulls themselves cream colored and putting the design on a colored shirt (maybe maroon?) would help it stand out a little. (If you put the design on a dark-colored shirt, you'll probably need to adjust the line color, as well.)



Overall, it looks okay, but you're working with two concepts (skulls and the "see, hear, speak" theme) that are seen very frequently in the submissions and are rarely received well. In order to impress the community, you'll need to do something to this that makes it something more. The trick is finding a balance between what the community will probably like, and what you like.



(And hey, it's totally fine to screw what the voters like and go with what you want to do--it's actually better, in fact. Just be aware that that's what you're doing.)

cool idea and very nice illustrations. i'd try to improve the ear plugs though. at first i thought they were those things in frankenstein's head. i'd say a bit too angular and maybe could use a highlight like the other skulls.



if you have a minute...

Hit the lights...

want someone from threadless to tell me if it is applicable???

plz critique and score my design...

That's an awesome idea.

Cool idea! Glow in the dark ink?



Though the right down the center thing it kind of an odd placement. Maybe stager the three in a horizontal line or a diagonal, with them all slightly over lapping. Have them being various sizes too? Make them not so uniform.

i like any of the versions, but i think i like this one the most



Critiques are welcome :)

looks real good!

Totally awesome!!! Really diggin the 'lights on, lights off' designs



If you don't mind, please crit my friendship

and

hearts-a-fire designs

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I agree w/ el Capulin!!!... likin it so far!

I'm not to fond of the placement, but the idea is interesting.

IT IS COOL BUT IT WILL NEVER LOOK LIKE THAT

I feel like a side-by-side lineup would read easier. I like the images, but I don't know about the feasibility of making the alternatives show properly.

The line-up in v1 is coolest (maybe make the middle one a bit bigger than the other two?). I dunno how to do the lights thing. Glow-in-the-dark seems best.



I don't really like skulls, especially with horns, but that's a personal thing. It's definitely some really good work.

try placing the skulls horizontally!

looks cool with the glow but I dont know if it's technically possible

These skulls are much better now.



Your vote counts!

This one!

This other one!

thnks all 4 ur helpful suggestions...

I think this is more angelic..

so which one is better V5 or V4?

plz critique my designs ...

Turn Me On

and about the placement... am trying all the possible placements ..

Honestly i kinda prefered it black and white, but thats up to you

I tend to agree with the suggestion of a kind of muzzle on the third one or a clearer illustration the cloth, as it took me a bit to process it back when I first saw it. Not totally sure about the halos or the colours, but we'll see what others think.

I like v5. I think the headphones or the lightning bolts need a little more red in them, though.

this all the placement I could think of ... plz pick the best one..

plz critique my other design ...

Turn Me ON

I liked B&W better but the demon and angel concept is really nice... I think this is almost ready for submission



Check mine

[RAWR]

placement 1 and 3 are my favorites

I do like placement 3 most of all. I don't know about the colors, however. Personally I think that you should go with black and white as well, or colors that are more bold than the ones you currently have.



Return The Favor?

i also like placement 1 and 3 the best. maybe slightly more saturated colors somewhere between v5 and v6 (thats my preference). Newly updated design feel free to critique:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/38918/Primary_Listening

3

I like 2 best. The ... heads... don't have to be so far apart. They can even touch or overlap each other and I think the design would be more visually exciting; one design instead of three separate spots.

Oo. Like these colours! And placement two or three.



That last one should maybe look more gag like though I think. Not so old west bandit.



I like how this is progressing though!





Wanna give me your thought on my design?

I like placement one!

i think placement 5 looks the best!

i think the skulls should be closer and almost overlapping or interacting somehow



check mine out = here

I think placement one, but go back to black and white. I love the glow in the dark idea too. This is looking great!

I like the third placement. :]

placement 3 is best

this is brilliant. 1 and 5 are killing it in my opinion, would buy either one in a heartbeat.

2 and 3 are my favorite.

yeah. 1 and 3, nice illustration!

Placement 1, clearly.



Any feedback on my design? Pollution: "rubbish eats both"

this is a really cool idea. I like it with placement 1.

i like the placement 2. great idea. cool presentation.

Epic. Absolutely Awesome.

See here's the problem with 6 revisions of the same work. After 6 different versions your votes are 11 for submit --and 9 for needs work and don't submit. And that is how the final voting will go if you submit this. No piece of art can make it across an art directors desk that many times and win a final vote. If a design doesn't work in the first few, say three revisions, time to move on to a new design and let this one go. Not trying to bum you out just keeping it real.

Is that thing with the lights even possible?

yes ... I asked threadless and they told me it is printable as it shows ....

thnks RubyP... I respect ur theory ... but am not just trying to win votes ... am trying to learn from my mistakes ...

YOU STOLE THAT SKULL FROM THIS GUY: http://olddirtydermot.com/about.html



BOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

i like 1 and 2..



what about making them glow in the dark?

just an idea..



see you

incredible

Changed lots of things ... hopes U like it more ...

so what do u think ???

Not sure.... I like the artwork, but I'm not ENTIRELY sure if I like it more than v6. I probably makes a little more sense than the other versions, but that's just my opinion.

Critique mine???

Eagle Splendor

I'm not so sure if I like this one better than v6. I like the artwork, and ya, it probably makes more sense, so I'd say go with it.

Critique mine??

Eagle Splendor

I like the drawing on this one but like the others, I prefer V6.



Please comment on my Poor Teddy?

I love this one!

I like this version much more than the previous

lights on..lights off...

i like that u can turn the lights of and on the design is nice...

Awesome!



Please crit mine!

i like this version best.

the dramatic change between the girls and skulls

is what got me =]

that's sooo sweet! i would actually buy the shirt with the lights turned off though...it might help to have a girl version and a guy version cause i dunno if i would want to wear the one with the anime graphic on it...really cool work though!



What do you think of mine? Phoenix Rising

Love the angel, demon contrast. It's a little hard to see the angel though because of the white background. as for making the shirt appeal more to us guys, I'd suggest making the girl sexy in some fashion. Don't get me wrong though, i think it's an awesome shirt. Loving the idea. Heck, I might just buy it only for the demons in the dark :)

Fantastic change from the skulls on the good side. This has come a long way. With the change however, the hear to evil girl is less clear. The white plugs in the white hair on the white background are hard to see. Her hair may have to be different to make it clear. Great work!



I would appreciate your vote

looks wicked!

I still like v6 more! lol



New design! Would love your thoughts.

I think I prefer this one better than version 6, because of the anime concept. Version 6 just looks weird imo, because of the different colors. This one looks decent enough, ready for submission



I really love it anime-ed this way.. So, you're an anime artist? (:

This is hard to critique in comparison to the others. It's so different. I presonally don't care for anime and I like version 2 the best. But thats just my oppinion.

I think I prefer this version to v6. This is a very cool idea. Good luck!

SUBMIT or NO

Submit!!!

great work, love the effect. i agree with notnorm , just to add a little clarity to the hear with the earplugs and then submit

Nice, but I like more the previous version.

I´m agree with some people above, better previous version . sorry I love skulls.

I vote Version 6

i like the girls, i dont like the skulls ... but thats just me ... i would say this is your better version for sure though



thanks for commenting on mine

yeah 1 and 2 are sick so is v5/6 newest one is not so good...

I like the artwork on this one, although I think i prefer v6. It you made the earplugs more obvious it would be great.

Please critique mine:

Etch A Sketch

it comes down to this ... 1 OR 2 ...

click the girl on the left to see the second version ...

all inputs appreciated ...

I prefer skulls to random anime women.

1 vote for skulls ...

The bottom skull reminds me too much of that skull you see on the back of lifted trucks....the one with the bandana.

PS: Crit me? HERE PLEASE

1 for sure.

Skulls vs ANIME

2 0

. SKULLS vs ANIME .

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I prefer skulls ..much better

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guys ... plz may u pick one of the two versions ... and score it from 0-5...

score 4 for skulls

I´ll go for the skulls too. Pretty amazing if that happens when I´ll turn off the light.



Nice.

Sweet design, i'd defenitely go with the skulls. Great work

if you got time please crit me

i really like the girl version... it shows two versions the light and dark side

The difference between the girl with lights on/off is more shocking, having a better effect. But I love the skulls. Somewhere between a 3-4

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skulls one, definitively, is a lot better

i would give it a 4



Check mine please

[RAWR]

hmm. .not sure about the plugs in the ears..

nice idea i just wonder if the inks would work like that though..

You could have skulls on front and girl on back



I appreciate your comments Tainted Beauty

I appreciate your comments Alpha Beta

Personally I like the anime girl. (:

I would definitely buy this.



Anyway, if you have time, kindly comment on my design. Thanks!!!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/43128/Spike_Splat

SKULLS definitely



what about mine?

skulls for sure. makes better transition to the glow in the dark too.

Skulls. and, AMAZING DESIGN!

Pls crit mine thanks :)

Skullz... if I noticed the light effect, a solid 4 ;)

I just put up a new design as well if yall have time

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Skulls, although I'm not sure what the things in the skulls ears are. Maybe Earmuffs would work better, or head phones? They look kinda like hippo or puppet ears to me right now. Or Shrek ears, maybe. Dunno. I'd scratch the anime ones all together, the UV Skulls are way cooler.



Can you swing a crit down to my end of the table? I'd be much obliged.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43227/Until_Cooler_Heads_Prevail

the skulls is your best bet Dnt knw bout the hear no evil one tho

Definitely skulls :D



Please vote for mine if you have a minute. Thanks!

Great design, id stick with the skulls and not the anime women but thats just me =D

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skulls hands down. i love this design

Definitely the skulls--anime has a far less universal appeal.



Help is appreciated.

changed the ear plugs ... think its better this way ...

also what about the writing on the back ..???

plz give it a score...

I don't understand the representation of Hear for the light version, and think the back should just have the same words glowing rather than a different design. Apart from that, cool!

Changed th ear plug again ....

what about the design on the back ...???

plz give it a score from 0 - 5 ...

feel like the type on the back is not needed, the image on the front speaks for itself and reads, "see, hear, speak no evil" while the back makes it sound like you are naming three of the senses instead of the underlying message.

Yes I agree with Johnny, great work otherwise

Hey, a unique skull design. Nice work! I also agree, text not needed.

cool change colours could work

I like your style and the colours..although i think the skull thing is overdone

I remember this from a while back! Definitely no text, but otherwise looking good.



Please check my critique for the latest version thanks

Yeah. No text please.



I'd like to see each skull in a solid colour instead of the gradient.



=) Love the idea. I'd say it's almost ready.



Feeling Stuck?

Blobs.

I preferd version 2



please crit me and there

No text ...

Submit or NO

wow....that is the best one

think it needs nothing more

I'm not fun of colors versions but It's only opinion personel. Images are very goods

like the concept, not a big fan of the plaecment

Very good:)



Check out mine??





http://www.threadless.com/critique/43609/Love_is_a_Puzzle

I like it.

i love it, i say sub! love the gradient

This is so awesome! Have you tried it on different colors?





I don't like the back one either...idk I don't think it needs it.

very nice. how do you simulate glow though?? I want to know cause Im doing a design with glow in it. Any advice will be most appreciated :)



check mine:

Hope

Timeless Rock

Guitarist

Good concept...

Do IT.

Critique Mine Please?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/43698/The_Hand_Man

Like it. Not very fond on the glow-in-the-dark design though.

I'm going to assume that this was stolen just like ...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43652/hang_in_there#lastcomment

...as it dosn't match any of your other submissions in style or skill. I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt, but please don't submit this if it isn't yours. Seriously. It's increadibly depressing for people who actually work on this stuff to have it ripped off like this, and it will bite you in the ass eventually.

great, love it in the dark!



can u pls check it out?

less complicated for easier printing ...

what do u think ??

I'm not sure if i'd wear it but i think the design is just great. Really nice artwork :)

i think it's ready to be subbed.



check out my design, too:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/51771/Unmasked_Revelation

I love it at first I was hesitant but after the glow in the dark version I liked it a lot.



Score mine if you can its in the running

Click Here

WOW, i love it, sub it.



If you have time give me same critique.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/51742/Dog_DJ

what do u think about halos ???

Man, this design gives me goosebumps!!! Love it!



I would prefer no halos on the design. However, if you do decide to keep them, how about adding devil horns to the glow in the dark pictures? Little cliche but would add lots to it IMO as tere is not much going on around the head area (apart from the middle).



Hope this helps!

thnks ... was thinking about the same thing ..

just needed someone to confirm ...

Just as a quick note(I'm not gonna judge the actual art since its just not my taste), I really don't think the gradients do anything for your design, I'd recommend ditching them, or at least going with more coordinated colors.

nice and cool design!



can you help me with mine?

http://threadless.com/critique/51907/The_Girl

so remove halos and add some horns ??

Yes. But I don't know. The daylight version doesn't really do anything for me. I love the lights off version. If it were me I would make the daylight version look like the lights off version. It should of course still glow in the dark. I know you were going for the contrast. But for a true contrast you would need to actually do angels rather than skulls. Skulls just aren't very angelic and putting halos on them doesn't change that. Plus I think the twist, of seeing evil, hearing evil, and speaking evil is much more original. I would definitely give the lights off version shirt a 5.

skulls rule! Too bad the skull is a clipart one, you sure the copyright is off?



If you have time i would appreciate your comment on my latest submission.

Thanks!

yes ... copyrights is off ...

halos are optional ...

any suggestions to make the lights on version more interesting ...

just an idea ...

what do u think about the tuxedo thing ...

still working on it ...

NO halos!

this the lights on version ...

the glow in the dark still as it is ...

any suggestions ...

cool I like the colors and the glow in the dark. Only thing is that maybe the earplugs gets a little lost in the dark colors. oh well I say sub anyway :P



If you got time please crit me

Love the tuxedos. Definitely adds interest. I like the positioning of the shoulders in your black, gray, and white version. I was thinking maybe if you reversed the colors and made the black the closest skeleton and the lightest the furthest away. I also really like the purple. But yes the earplugs do get a little lost. Maybe if you did varying shades of purple in the same way as I suggested for the black and white one. That way the earplugs should stand out more. But nice work. I would like to see this get printed.

dude that f***n sick...tuxedos make the design i rekon...ready to send to the printer!

u made my day ...

hats or no hats ???

no hats but if you were to keep them i think that the placement is a little to close to the collar



Any thoughts on my critiques

The Shredding

Cryptozoology

Dude! Freeking love seeing the updated versions of this designs! I like the additions of the suits and glad you added horns to them.



I like the stances of v14 way better than the current one. Personally, i think the purple colour is a little too bright for my liking (IMO). The earplugs need a brighter colour too. Maybe you can have corks in them instead?



Keep working at this one - its already looking amazing!

Nice! What about the first blindfolded, closing the second's hear, who is closing the third's mouth.. I think that's be more catchy.

I like this a lot. I do however think the design would work a little better without the hats. I'm also torn between the way it is now, and the idea mohlam12 had, especially since the ear bolt/plug things are kinda hard to see. I guess I would rather see you make those more noticable than anything else



also, critique mine if you have the time please :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/52231/Catch_Me_If_You_Can

the thing is, I don't get the mohlam12 idea ???

plz anyone care to explain ...

I like the hats, but no halos. Also maybe try the placement to the right or to the left a bit.



Mind helping me?

My Design-Click Here

made the ear plugs more clear ...

what do u think submit or what ???

great work ... think its ready ...

hit submit ....................

shading looks a bit strange.

is there shading over left side or not or partially why partially? I think it needs a bit more work

pretty flippin awesome man

It's weird how the hats have shading but nothing else does... work on that. Otherwise, it looks fantastic.



My design:

Octalove

totally agree with u ...

removed shadow ...

people plz help, submit or what ???

bump...

This is an awsome concept. Submit

suggestions for mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51958/Robo_Standoff

thnks that's great ...

submit

Nice, submit this!!

Worth the wait I'd say. I'd get this if it gets printed. Hopefully it will.

Check out mine if you want to, dont have to though
camel games

wait. why was this so far up lol , it a bit far out out of date. Hope it was printed though

very cool and creative. great work!!! $5

Please let me know what you think of mine. I could really use the help and some feed back. Thank you so much.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo

Very creativee, I also like V1 :D

Check mine :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85531/What_is_rain_made_of

this is amazing man, great job! submit for sure! Check mine out if you got a minute.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85233/Ninja_Girl

http://www.threadless.com/critique/85235/The_Shade_of_Shades

COOL!!AMAZinG!!!AWESOME!!BRILLIANT ART!!!!
SUBMIT it!!!! im gona be ur FAN!
mix with the UV colour or Glow colour,..juz speechless XD

please feedback mine too..
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85631/POP_and_AWARENESS

COOOL I like your idea of using the glow in the dark thing xD

By the way, if you have a minute, check out mine :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85730/Heartbroken

Wow nice one, I like the idea!!

it really nice design..
Love everything in your design,
I hope u can help me to see n vote my design too
you can see the detail in : http://www.threadless.com/critique/94789/climbed_to_your_heart
and....
for vote in : http://www.threadless.com/submission/369986/climbed_the_top_of_your_heart
thank u...