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ElPuTTo on Mar 07 '09
I like the design alot. Very clean and graphic. But, I think the concept would be more easily understood if the skulls were each different. The "speak no evil" also does not communicate. It is hard to tell what the object is in front of his mouth. I like the clean look, but you may want to focus on another concept. The See no evil, hear no evil ,speak no evil has been a little overdone. Keep it up though.
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MKcmyk on Mar 09 '09
I think its better this way ...
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Blonde design on Mar 09 '09
Love the illustration, really clean, bold and graphic.
Took me a couple of looks to realise what was infront of the mouth on the last, but if you fix this I think its done, and you def have to submit it! Just an idea, but maybe a shattered jaw? Really cool. |
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MKcmyk on Mar 09 '09
thnks ... the lower jaw is slightly shattered ... i 'll try to make it more obvious ..
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RedRobotMonkey on Mar 09 '09
this might not be what you want, but I will say it just in case it will help. Maybe you can add a little bit of red to each skull, in the form of blood, but really subtle-like.
I love skull designs, so this is obviously my kind of shirt. Good luck. comment on mine? |
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DinosaurVoodoo on Mar 09 '09
Blondedesign is right the style is gnarly as, but id remove the axe, and replace it with a completely shattered jaw, seperated, teeth knocked out etc, would be more obvious.
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Sofamonkeyz on Mar 09 '09
Yeah remove the axe i thought it was a lollipop or something first...Personaly I like skulls, but from what I gather Threadless isn't super fond of them...so taking that into account I'd try a give the skulls a unique charecter that stands out from other skulls. Looks clean though.
feel free to crit mine! http://www.threadless.com/critique/38224/ZombieMan |
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 09 '09
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 09 '09
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 09 '09
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 09 '09
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 09 '09
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you should consider making some changes to the skulls, so they aren't so copy paste.
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NealJMD on Mar 09 '09
I like the style, I think the ax should be firmly in the jaw, horizontal, it looks odd now.
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 09 '09
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Mel_xox on Mar 09 '09
The design is really nice and clean. I think you should definitly submit this :)
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Pixelweltenbummler on Mar 09 '09
yeah put the axe on top of the skull and add some cracks.. :)
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MKcmyk on Mar 10 '09
thnks all for ur helpful comments ...
i thought i might change the theme just a little bit ... which one is better "2" or "3"...? |
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The drawing looks good. I would agree with what others have said about the ax on the last one.
One thing to consider is color use. It's a fairly striking design (up and down is definitely the way to go), but the users on this site are unlikely to be impressed with plain white on black. Making the skulls themselves cream colored and putting the design on a colored shirt (maybe maroon?) would help it stand out a little. (If you put the design on a dark-colored shirt, you'll probably need to adjust the line color, as well.) Overall, it looks okay, but you're working with two concepts (skulls and the "see, hear, speak" theme) that are seen very frequently in the submissions and are rarely received well. In order to impress the community, you'll need to do something to this that makes it something more. The trick is finding a balance between what the community will probably like, and what you like. (And hey, it's totally fine to screw what the voters like and go with what you want to do--it's actually better, in fact. Just be aware that that's what you're doing.) |
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admann on Mar 10 '09
cool idea and very nice illustrations. i'd try to improve the ear plugs though. at first i thought they were those things in frankenstein's head. i'd say a bit too angular and maybe could use a highlight like the other skulls.
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MKcmyk on Mar 13 '09
Hit the lights...
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Hagnii on Mar 13 '09
That's an awesome idea.
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tawmie on Mar 13 '09
Cool idea! Glow in the dark ink?
Though the right down the center thing it kind of an odd placement. Maybe stager the three in a horizontal line or a diagonal, with them all slightly over lapping. Have them being various sizes too? Make them not so uniform. |
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iamabeast on Mar 13 '09
looks real good!
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Lissa-B on Mar 13 '09
Totally awesome!!! Really diggin the 'lights on, lights off' designs
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Lhiiiz on Mar 14 '09
I'm not to fond of the placement, but the idea is interesting.
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SlutWithAbutt on Mar 14 '09
IT IS COOL BUT IT WILL NEVER LOOK LIKE THAT
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Happenstance Heroes on Mar 14 '09
I feel like a side-by-side lineup would read easier. I like the images, but I don't know about the feasibility of making the alternatives show properly.
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calvi on Mar 14 '09
The line-up in v1 is coolest (maybe make the middle one a bit bigger than the other two?). I dunno how to do the lights thing. Glow-in-the-dark seems best.
I don't really like skulls, especially with horns, but that's a personal thing. It's definitely some really good work. |
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Soumitro on Mar 14 '09
try placing the skulls horizontally!
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Ehud L on Mar 14 '09
looks cool with the glow but I dont know if it's technically possible
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MKcmyk on Mar 14 '09
thnks all 4 ur helpful suggestions...
I think this is more angelic.. so which one is better V5 or V4? plz critique my designs ... Turn Me On |
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MKcmyk on Mar 14 '09
and about the placement... am trying all the possible placements ..
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Marleed on Mar 14 '09
Honestly i kinda prefered it black and white, but thats up to you
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Happenstance Heroes on Mar 14 '09
I tend to agree with the suggestion of a kind of muzzle on the third one or a clearer illustration the cloth, as it took me a bit to process it back when I first saw it. Not totally sure about the halos or the colours, but we'll see what others think.
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IfishIII on Mar 14 '09
I like v5. I think the headphones or the lightning bolts need a little more red in them, though.
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MKcmyk on Mar 14 '09
this all the placement I could think of ... plz pick the best one..
plz critique my other design ... Turn Me ON |
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MegaMugen on Mar 14 '09
I liked B&W better but the demon and angel concept is really nice... I think this is almost ready for submission
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MegaMugen on Mar 14 '09
placement 1 and 3 are my favorites
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Robles Dezignz on Mar 14 '09
I do like placement 3 most of all. I don't know about the colors, however. Personally I think that you should go with black and white as well, or colors that are more bold than the ones you currently have.
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eleeze on Mar 14 '09
i also like placement 1 and 3 the best. maybe slightly more saturated colors somewhere between v5 and v6 (thats my preference). Newly updated design feel free to critique:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/38918/Primary_Listening |
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RAD_Design on Mar 14 '09
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Francesa on Mar 15 '09
I like 2 best. The ... heads... don't have to be so far apart. They can even touch or overlap each other and I think the design would be more visually exciting; one design instead of three separate spots.
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tawmie on Mar 15 '09
Oo. Like these colours! And placement two or three.
That last one should maybe look more gag like though I think. Not so old west bandit. I like how this is progressing though! Wanna give me your thought on my design? |
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christineattanasio on Mar 15 '09
I like placement one!
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hmp222 on Mar 15 '09
i think placement 5 looks the best!
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jpweeks on Mar 15 '09
i think the skulls should be closer and almost overlapping or interacting somehow
check mine out = here |
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Blonde design on Mar 17 '09
I think placement one, but go back to black and white. I love the glow in the dark idea too. This is looking great!
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The_Ali on Mar 17 '09
I like the third placement. :]
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timefiller on Mar 17 '09
placement 3 is best
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LastoneClothing on Mar 17 '09
this is brilliant. 1 and 5 are killing it in my opinion, would buy either one in a heartbeat.
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calvi on Mar 18 '09
2 and 3 are my favorite.
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gfuse on Mar 18 '09
yeah. 1 and 3, nice illustration!
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xxdontaskmexx on Mar 19 '09
this is a really cool idea. I like it with placement 1.
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panaretos on Mar 19 '09
i like the placement 2. great idea. cool presentation.
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00caco on Mar 19 '09
Epic. Absolutely Awesome.
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RubyP on Mar 19 '09
See here's the problem with 6 revisions of the same work. After 6 different versions your votes are 11 for submit --and 9 for needs work and don't submit. And that is how the final voting will go if you submit this. No piece of art can make it across an art directors desk that many times and win a final vote. If a design doesn't work in the first few, say three revisions, time to move on to a new design and let this one go. Not trying to bum you out just keeping it real.
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LeviMcAwesome on Mar 19 '09
Is that thing with the lights even possible?
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MKcmyk on Mar 19 '09
yes ... I asked threadless and they told me it is printable as it shows ....
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MKcmyk on Mar 19 '09
thnks RubyP... I respect ur theory ... but am not just trying to win votes ... am trying to learn from my mistakes ...
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monkeydumpster on Mar 27 '09
YOU STOLE THAT SKULL FROM THIS GUY: http://olddirtydermot.com/about.html
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MrYoppa on Mar 28 '09
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
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MKcmyk on Apr 19 '09
Changed lots of things ... hopes U like it more ...
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theCRAZYartGUY on Apr 19 '09
Not sure.... I like the artwork, but I'm not ENTIRELY sure if I like it more than v6. I probably makes a little more sense than the other versions, but that's just my opinion.
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theCRAZYartGUY on Apr 19 '09
I'm not so sure if I like this one better than v6. I like the artwork, and ya, it probably makes more sense, so I'd say go with it.
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An De Wit on Apr 20 '09
I love this one!
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Didika on Apr 20 '09
I like this version much more than the previous
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dioBrando on Apr 20 '09
lights on..lights off...
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Mayra3 on Apr 20 '09
i like that u can turn the lights of and on the design is nice...
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Just_Call_Me_AL on Apr 20 '09
i like this version best.
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shinannigan on Apr 20 '09
that's sooo sweet! i would actually buy the shirt with the lights turned off though...it might help to have a girl version and a guy version cause i dunno if i would want to wear the one with the anime graphic on it...really cool work though!
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VVolf on Apr 20 '09
Love the angel, demon contrast. It's a little hard to see the angel though because of the white background. as for making the shirt appeal more to us guys, I'd suggest making the girl sexy in some fashion. Don't get me wrong though, i think it's an awesome shirt. Loving the idea. Heck, I might just buy it only for the demons in the dark :)
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notnorm on Apr 20 '09
Fantastic change from the skulls on the good side. This has come a long way. With the change however, the hear to evil girl is less clear. The white plugs in the white hair on the white background are hard to see. Her hair may have to be different to make it clear. Great work!
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4wordsback on Apr 20 '09
looks wicked!
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fat_lip on Apr 20 '09
I think I prefer this one better than version 6, because of the anime concept. Version 6 just looks weird imo, because of the different colors. This one looks decent enough, ready for submission
I really love it anime-ed this way.. So, you're an anime artist? (: |
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XianNC on Apr 20 '09
This is hard to critique in comparison to the others. It's so different. I presonally don't care for anime and I like version 2 the best. But thats just my oppinion.
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Tigerdog on Apr 22 '09
I think I prefer this version to v6. This is a very cool idea. Good luck!
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MKcmyk on Apr 22 '09
SUBMIT or NO
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PigBoatCaptain on Apr 25 '09
Submit!!!
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Atrayne on Apr 25 '09
great work, love the effect. i agree with notnorm , just to add a little clarity to the hear with the earplugs and then submit
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harturo123 on Apr 25 '09
Nice, but I like more the previous version.
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SENSEY on Apr 25 '09
I´m agree with some people above, better previous version . sorry I love skulls.
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theevidenceisme on Apr 25 '09
i like the girls, i dont like the skulls ... but thats just me ... i would say this is your better version for sure though
thanks for commenting on mine |
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unHEARDof on Apr 26 '09
yeah 1 and 2 are sick so is v5/6 newest one is not so good...
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Howdy Howdy on Apr 26 '09
I like the artwork on this one, although I think i prefer v6. It you made the earplugs more obvious it would be great.
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MKcmyk on Apr 26 '09
it comes down to this ... 1 OR 2 ...
click the girl on the left to see the second version ... all inputs appreciated ... |
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I prefer skulls to random anime women.
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MKcmyk on Apr 27 '09
1 vote for skulls ...
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Whitney.Leach on Apr 27 '09
The bottom skull reminds me too much of that skull you see on the back of lifted trucks....the one with the bandana.
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Whitney.Leach on Apr 27 '09
PS: Crit me? HERE PLEASE
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tawmie on Apr 27 '09
1 for sure.
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MKcmyk on Apr 27 '09
Skulls vs ANIME
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MKcmyk on Apr 27 '09
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afegypt on Apr 27 '09
I prefer skulls ..much better
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MKcmyk on Apr 27 '09
guys ... plz may u pick one of the two versions ... and score it from 0-5...
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afegypt on Apr 27 '09
score 4 for skulls
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The Maze on Apr 27 '09
I´ll go for the skulls too. Pretty amazing if that happens when I´ll turn off the light.
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FourteenDesigns on Apr 27 '09
i really like the girl version... it shows two versions the light and dark side
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carolxhsu on Apr 27 '09
The difference between the girl with lights on/off is more shocking, having a better effect. But I love the skulls. Somewhere between a 3-4
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MKcmyk on Apr 27 '09
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hmm. .not sure about the plugs in the ears..
nice idea i just wonder if the inks would work like that though.. |
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hsoraparu on May 01 '09
You could have skulls on front and girl on back
I appreciate your comments Tainted Beauty I appreciate your comments Alpha Beta |
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fat_lip on May 02 '09
Personally I like the anime girl. (:
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30thjoint on May 02 '09
I would definitely buy this.
Anyway, if you have time, kindly comment on my design. Thanks!!! http://www.threadless.com/critique/43128/Spike_Splat |
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blankpage80 on May 03 '09
skulls for sure. makes better transition to the glow in the dark too.
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Maxixen on May 03 '09
Skulls. and, AMAZING DESIGN!
Pls crit mine thanks :) |
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Bobzar77 on May 04 '09
Skullz... if I noticed the light effect, a solid 4 ;)
I just put up a new design as well if yall have time |
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MKcmyk on May 04 '09
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Agent_Dick on May 04 '09
Skulls, although I'm not sure what the things in the skulls ears are. Maybe Earmuffs would work better, or head phones? They look kinda like hippo or puppet ears to me right now. Or Shrek ears, maybe. Dunno. I'd scratch the anime ones all together, the UV Skulls are way cooler.
Can you swing a crit down to my end of the table? I'd be much obliged. http://www.threadless.com/critique/43227/Until_Cooler_Heads_Prevail |
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AKingOfOneself on May 04 '09
the skulls is your best bet Dnt knw bout the hear no evil one tho
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aj505 on May 04 '09
Great design, id stick with the skulls and not the anime women but thats just me =D
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PlagasArtist on May 04 '09
skulls hands down. i love this design
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MKcmyk on May 06 '09
changed the ear plugs ... think its better this way ...
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Jaffacakelover on May 06 '09
I don't understand the representation of Hear for the light version, and think the back should just have the same words glowing rather than a different design. Apart from that, cool!
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MKcmyk on May 06 '09
Changed th ear plug again ....
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Johnny Funtimes on May 08 '09
feel like the type on the back is not needed, the image on the front speaks for itself and reads, "see, hear, speak no evil" while the back makes it sound like you are naming three of the senses instead of the underlying message.
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aksel on May 08 '09
Yes I agree with Johnny, great work otherwise
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Lumpycheeks on May 08 '09
Hey, a unique skull design. Nice work! I also agree, text not needed.
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myfuture on May 08 '09
cool change colours could work
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I like your style and the colours..although i think the skull thing is overdone
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I remember this from a while back! Definitely no text, but otherwise looking good.
Please check my critique for the latest version thanks |
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ziazek on May 08 '09
Yeah. No text please.
I'd like to see each skull in a solid colour instead of the gradient. =) Love the idea. I'd say it's almost ready. Feeling Stuck? Blobs. |
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MKcmyk on May 08 '09
No text ...
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afegypt on May 08 '09
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Grafica.cz on May 09 '09
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like the concept, not a big fan of the plaecment
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taliamarin1994 on May 09 '09
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epoca on May 09 '09
I like it.
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i love it, i say sub! love the gradient
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Misterate on May 09 '09
This is so awesome! Have you tried it on different colors?
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VVolf on May 09 '09
very nice. how do you simulate glow though?? I want to know cause Im doing a design with glow in it. Any advice will be most appreciated :)
check mine: Hope Timeless Rock Guitarist |
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tvine on May 10 '09
Good concept...
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b1ackjeebus on May 11 '09
Do IT.
Critique Mine Please? http://www.threadless.com/critique/43698/The_Hand_Man |
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meeloox on May 11 '09
Like it. Not very fond on the glow-in-the-dark design though.
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Smokingornon on Jun 28 '09
I'm going to assume that this was stolen just like ...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/43652/hang_in_there#lastcomment ...as it dosn't match any of your other submissions in style or skill. I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt, but please don't submit this if it isn't yours. Seriously. It's increadibly depressing for people who actually work on this stuff to have it ripped off like this, and it will bite you in the ass eventually. |
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Ekspanzi on Jun 28 '09
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MKcmyk on Aug 30 '09
less complicated for easier printing ...
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I'm not sure if i'd wear it but i think the design is just great. Really nice artwork :)
i think it's ready to be subbed. check out my design, too: http://www.threadless.com/critique/51771/Unmasked_Revelation |
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LSD25 on Aug 30 '09
I love it at first I was hesitant but after the glow in the dark version I liked it a lot.
Score mine if you can its in the running Click Here |
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feruri on Aug 30 '09
WOW, i love it, sub it.
If you have time give me same critique. http://www.threadless.com/critique/51742/Dog_DJ |
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MKcmyk on Aug 31 '09
what do u think about halos ???
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OrangeSensation1 on Aug 31 '09
Man, this design gives me goosebumps!!! Love it!
I would prefer no halos on the design. However, if you do decide to keep them, how about adding devil horns to the glow in the dark pictures? Little cliche but would add lots to it IMO as tere is not much going on around the head area (apart from the middle). Hope this helps! |
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MKcmyk on Aug 31 '09
thnks ... was thinking about the same thing ..
just needed someone to confirm ... |
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drewfarr on Aug 31 '09
Just as a quick note(I'm not gonna judge the actual art since its just not my taste), I really don't think the gradients do anything for your design, I'd recommend ditching them, or at least going with more coordinated colors.
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MKcmyk on Sep 02 '09
so remove halos and add some horns ??
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thirteendaisies on Sep 02 '09
Yes. But I don't know. The daylight version doesn't really do anything for me. I love the lights off version. If it were me I would make the daylight version look like the lights off version. It should of course still glow in the dark. I know you were going for the contrast. But for a true contrast you would need to actually do angels rather than skulls. Skulls just aren't very angelic and putting halos on them doesn't change that. Plus I think the twist, of seeing evil, hearing evil, and speaking evil is much more original. I would definitely give the lights off version shirt a 5.
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hotspot on Sep 03 '09
skulls rule! Too bad the skull is a clipart one, you sure the copyright is off?
If you have time i would appreciate your comment on my latest submission. Thanks! |
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MKcmyk on Sep 03 '09
yes ... copyrights is off ...
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MKcmyk on Sep 03 '09
halos are optional ...
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MKcmyk on Sep 03 '09
just an idea ...
what do u think about the tuxedo thing ... still working on it ... |
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sarapeep on Sep 03 '09
NO halos!
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MKcmyk on Sep 03 '09
this the lights on version ...
the glow in the dark still as it is ... any suggestions ... |
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aksel on Sep 03 '09
cool I like the colors and the glow in the dark. Only thing is that maybe the earplugs gets a little lost in the dark colors. oh well I say sub anyway :P
If you got time please crit me |
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thirteendaisies on Sep 03 '09
Love the tuxedos. Definitely adds interest. I like the positioning of the shoulders in your black, gray, and white version. I was thinking maybe if you reversed the colors and made the black the closest skeleton and the lightest the furthest away. I also really like the purple. But yes the earplugs do get a little lost. Maybe if you did varying shades of purple in the same way as I suggested for the black and white one. That way the earplugs should stand out more. But nice work. I would like to see this get printed.
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bammoman on Sep 04 '09
dude that f***n sick...tuxedos make the design i rekon...ready to send to the printer!
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MKcmyk on Sep 04 '09
u made my day ...
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MKcmyk on Sep 04 '09
hats or no hats ???
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Yuhki Demers Design on Sep 04 '09
no hats but if you were to keep them i think that the placement is a little to close to the collar
Any thoughts on my critiques The Shredding Cryptozoology |
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OrangeSensation1 on Sep 04 '09
Dude! Freeking love seeing the updated versions of this designs! I like the additions of the suits and glad you added horns to them.
I like the stances of v14 way better than the current one. Personally, i think the purple colour is a little too bright for my liking (IMO). The earplugs need a brighter colour too. Maybe you can have corks in them instead? Keep working at this one - its already looking amazing! |
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mohlam12 on Sep 04 '09
Nice! What about the first blindfolded, closing the second's hear, who is closing the third's mouth.. I think that's be more catchy.
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Diggit_6 on Sep 06 '09
I like this a lot. I do however think the design would work a little better without the hats. I'm also torn between the way it is now, and the idea mohlam12 had, especially since the ear bolt/plug things are kinda hard to see. I guess I would rather see you make those more noticable than anything else
also, critique mine if you have the time please :) http://www.threadless.com/critique/52231/Catch_Me_If_You_Can |
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MKcmyk on Sep 06 '09
the thing is, I don't get the mohlam12 idea ???
plz anyone care to explain ... |
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spork23 on Sep 06 '09
I like the hats, but no halos. Also maybe try the placement to the right or to the left a bit.
Mind helping me? My Design-Click Here |
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MKcmyk on Sep 06 '09
made the ear plugs more clear ...
what do u think submit or what ??? |
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Breaker911 on Sep 07 '09
great work ... think its ready ...
hit submit .................... |
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extravisual on Sep 07 '09
shading looks a bit strange.
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Dr.Majic on Sep 07 '09
pretty flippin awesome man
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Almar20 on Sep 07 '09
It's weird how the hats have shading but nothing else does... work on that. Otherwise, it looks fantastic.
My design: Octalove |
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MKcmyk on Sep 08 '09
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MKcmyk on Sep 08 '09
removed shadow ...
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MKcmyk on Sep 09 '09
people plz help, submit or what ???
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MKcmyk on Sep 09 '09
bump...
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Dan_for_the_love on Sep 10 '09
This is an awsome concept. Submit
suggestions for mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/51958/Robo_Standoff |
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MKcmyk on Sep 10 '09
thnks that's great ...
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Bluberry72 on Sep 21 '09
submit
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Noznoz on Mar 03 '11
Nice, submit this!!
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alexrockclimber on Mar 03 '11
Worth the wait I'd say. I'd get this if it gets printed. Hopefully it will.
Check out mine if you want to, dont have to though camel games |
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alexrockclimber on Mar 03 '11
wait. why was this so far up lol , it a bit far out out of date. Hope it was printed though
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Ru Chery on Mar 03 '11
very cool and creative. great work!!! $5
Please let me know what you think of mine. I could really use the help and some feed back. Thank you so much. http://www.threadless.com/critique/85780/Rocka_doodle_doo |
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andresmoskona on Mar 03 '11
Very creativee, I also like V1 :D
Check mine :) http://www.threadless.com/critique/85531/What_is_rain_made_of |
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AdamButt on Mar 03 '11
this is amazing man, great job! submit for sure! Check mine out if you got a minute.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/85233/Ninja_Girl http://www.threadless.com/critique/85235/The_Shade_of_Shades |
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hyeJack on Mar 04 '11
COOL!!AMAZinG!!!AWESOME!!BRILLIANT ART!!!!
SUBMIT it!!!! im gona be ur FAN! mix with the UV colour or Glow colour,..juz speechless XD please feedback mine too.. http://www.threadless.com/critique/85631/POP_and_AWARENESS |
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najeeborg on Mar 04 '11
COOOL I like your idea of using the glow in the dark thing xD
By the way, if you have a minute, check out mine :) http://www.threadless.com/critique/85730/Heartbroken |
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tager01 on Mar 04 '11
Wow nice one, I like the idea!!
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crystalffx on Sep 16 '11
it really nice design..
Love everything in your design, I hope u can help me to see n vote my design too you can see the detail in : http://www.threadless.com/critique/94789/climbed_to_your_heart and.... for vote in : http://www.threadless.com/submission/369986/climbed_the_top_of_your_heart thank u... |



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