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v1 doodles, 1816 days ago, click to expand
v2 doodles, current version








Work in progress by:
The Results
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Needs Work
7
Dont Submit!
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Versions...
Version 1 - 1816 days ago
Version 2 - 1815 days ago

DShawn
DShawn on Jun 06 '07
colors could use a change im just experimenting. i like the light blue
DShawn
DShawn on Jun 06 '07
it pisses me off when people click " dont submit" and they dont tell me why
17 days later
Melikochan
Melikochan on Jun 23 '07
Out of curiosity, what program/how are you coloring this?
norwish
norwish on Jun 23 '07
Err... the colouring seems really messy, that's probably why people aren't voting for "Submit This"
DShawn
DShawn on Jun 23 '07
yea im struggling with coloring my scanned picture. im new to photo shop. i usually use paint

TimeThief
TimeThief on Jun 23 '07
Read my comment on your previous design.



You might want to master the basics of 'toshop to avoid the "messy, paint look" comment... It's not a software that one masters in a matter of minutes, so take it slow, experiement a bit, try to ahve a more "put together" image to present...
DShawn
DShawn on Jun 23 '07
yea which previous design
whatarebirds
whatarebirds on Jun 24 '07
It's really rough. Far too rough, and not showing any signs of being well drawn. There's no unifying idea, either.
DShawn
DShawn on Jun 24 '07
thats because im done with this idea geez. if i dont like it then i start something new
Melikochan
Melikochan on Jun 24 '07
Check out my comment in one of your other critiques about coloring.



The best thing about coloring in photoshop: Layers. Use and abuse 'em.
katieroz
katieroz on Jun 24 '07
i think the design needs to be cleaned up a lot. right now i don't see how it could be printed.
252 days later
4ourty 4our
4ourty 4our on Mar 02 '08
i liked the black and white better.



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