Where can this go?

Nice, but the body needs to have more detail. Maybe other animals listening in a crowd....?

i actually like this design a lot as is. making the colors of the animal more vivid in comparison to the rest of the shirt would help to make it stand out more







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I like the design as it is. I agree with Campfish91 - make the design stand out from the teeshirt - maybe try it on white or black....even blue, but don't fade it into colour of the tee. Good luck!

I really like the concept and the style, but i gotta agree with Campfish91, really make the design pop from the t-shirt to draw people in.

thanks for the crit btw was appreciated, when it goes to vote ill have nicer colourways done.

cool idea... you can do more out of it.

but nice so far ^^



help me with this, please:

http://threadless.com/critique/434203/Lips

http://www.threadless.com/critique/38808/Lichtenstein

I think a less transparent design would help kick it, like lime in salsa. I really dig the design. It's the balance I like best, I think.

Thank you so much, guys, I heart you.



Whaaaaat else?

Thks Brightwood

Woot! Awesome



Are the legs still going to be in this? Or did the page just load wrong?



Anyways, I kind of like the simple use of only a few colours. Only thing is maybe clean up the little La speech bubble.

And that's getting nit picky. I like the giraffe's main. :)

Wooo Slinky is here, bringing the party?!



The legs are still going to be here but I only wanted to show this part. I like the legs.



Should I get really get rid of all the La's? Can the leopard keep his?



Loooooooooove you

I liked the 'la's.

oh, I hand-draw stuff with a fountain pen on a piece of tragic paper. Then I take a very bad picture with a digital camera, strip it in Jasc Paintshop Pro, vectorize it with a nice free Inkscape and color in - get ready for this - MS Paint.



Yeah.



I like to think I'm keeping it real. Really I'm just contributing to global warming in my own special way

i really like it, tres odd :-) the hand drawn look is great, reminds me of old childrens cartoons, they always looked a bit 'wrong', which i liked.



and i like the la bubbles

Really cool. I would buy this.

Much better in these neuted colours. I liked the 'la's' on it,



Please vote on my first submissions! Thanks!



Vote on me!



And me!

I have no idea how you can colour this with ms paint haha, it looks good.

Thanks so much for the cell shading tip, I knew what it was but didn't know it was called that. Anyways I took your advice and I think it is much



Ps. I use a shady digicam to get all my drawings into the computer too.

*better

i like the la's too. and the feet. the feet could be a bit more varied though - paws hooves etc.

I like 'em as hooves.

Interesting design indeed. I dont get the meaning, but the design is Threadless. Good luck!



Critique me please!

So when I tried to put heads in the middle, it looked really silly onnaccounta I can't really draw the heads joining the body. A great idea though.



I think I'll clean up the lineart and show you two versions, one with singing, one without.



I MADE BAGELS TODAY, DO YOU KNOW HOW TO MAKE BAGELS?!

weird but cool

venganza-vendetta

All designs are improved by a COW



1. middle heads yes/no?

2. la's yes/no?

Yes to both, the robin and the stag seem a bit out of place IMO

I agree with the placement of the robin and stag.. and maybe they could be making some other noises besides la? I like the middle head.. looking good.

Yes to the middle heads. In fact I'd like more middle heads. Two more, to fill in the 2 spaces on either side of the cow.



The La's are great in a super lame way, which I do mean as a compliment. It's funny... to me at least. And I love the expression on the giraffe.

the giraffe is hilarious, the stag is sorta weird because it's smaller than the robin... the robin should be smaller

and the dog is kind of hard to identify because his spots arent shaded in...

and i think that the jaguar's ear might look better if it werent behind the dog...

but this is cool

maybe some shading too?



mine?:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/39961/April_Showers

http://www.threadless.com/critique/39985/Penguin_Patterns

This is really just my opinion, but I think but I think if you colored in the animals, and kind of swirled them together so it somehow looked like one solid beast, this would look extremely cool.



And I gotta say that I agree with everyone else: love the la's, but the stag seems really out of place. But I do think the robin is a nice touch, it just needs its own "la".





And thanks for the advice and encouragement. You really have no idea how much I appreciate it.



And because of what you said, I'll rework my critique so I won't end up getting sued. ;)

The stag... is a weasel with antlers. It made... so much sense at the time.



I am a giant dork but we love me?

I like the idea, but the design needs more work.



when you have time please look at my desing for the critique

I agree with jewelwing.....I really like the middles heads and would love to see more, fill up the space, go all out! Hope that helps, good luck!!

gone weasel-stag and plump-cheeked birdie, hello pony and crocodile?



Still need to tighten up lineart but how do you feel about these animals?

Who should be singing, and who shouldn't?

I love the las and I think they should all be la...ing, but maybe extend the lizard looking guys bubble out beyond the body so that it doesn't get lost.



I love the weirdness of it. I would absolutely wear it.

This is a fun idea! I def agree about the "La's" - would use music notes instead. I didn't notice half of the animals till I took a second look at it... The mouse in the middle is so small but its so cute!!



Keep going!!

I agree that the notes would be better, or if each animal was saying a different word to make a verse. I would also like to see more detail/fur in the legs. Thanks for looking at my cat design!

So I'm thinking instead of the hooves, some of the feet should be paws/claws and such. Also, are you going to color this, or keep it line art?

by the way... thanks for all the information on my 'blog' about bumping and such...



now that i have alittle idea of what is going on... i understand how its not so fun to 'bump' yourself!!



Thanks again!

Hey oddreaper a while ago you helped me with my design and told me to check out inkscape. I have and it worked but how do i make gif's and png's so i can sub the design. Please answer back on my "think in between" design

How about some colour?

Also, it's a little bit too confusing.



Please critique mine;

www.threadless.com/critique/23748/Out_to_Dry