This is in the early stages so most everything is still up in the air. The line art would be done with illustrator instead of by hand, and it would probably be placed in one of the corners of the shirt (top left?). I don't have a set idea for the colors, but I'm probably partial to the type and and line art being black with the figure in an alternate color. Any other ideas for a title that aren't so obvious? Let me know what you think!



(The different looking background on the left and right is just from how I took the picture.)

Very nice sketch, especially the text. The female's stomach looks a little weird (chubby) right under the breasts. Other than that everything looks pretty alright. However, although done in good taste, I dont know if this will pass by the censors here at Threadless.



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Need help with a title

I wasn't sure what their policy was on nudity. Does anyone have a link to their policies page for the content in submissions? I couldn't find one. I could always cover offending areas with some well placed vines/ leaves, but I kinda hate to do that.



The weird looking area is supposed to be her rib cage. (Is that the part you meant?) I may need to add some more to the left half to make that clearer. Any advice?

The style just doesn't seem to fit what usually gets printed on threadless.

I like the style. Not sure if they print nudity or not, but probably as long as it is tastfully done :-) and this is.



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Type is beautifull... maybe you can use some lines to artisticaly cover the nipples... Oh! and make sure the smallest lines don't look like pubes!

i feel the lines can be more defines to let the female body stands out more :) nice style

@Santo76 :

Do you mean the hatching? I can see how that could be a problem... The final version will probably use dots or something like that instead of hatch marks.

Just wanted to say thanks for your comments on my critique for Watch Where You Sit, and let you know that it's finally up for running if you'd like to score and comment on it.



Watch Where You Sit



I think Santo meant have some of the lines in the background come play into the foreground and cover the nipples. If you do crass hatching, take a look at this drawing



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All I could find on policies concerning nudity is this: "Submission Deemed Inappropriate

A submission can be declined if it contains material or themes that make us feel a little uneasy. That’s no small feat! Keep in mind that the community starts at 13…"



It's pretty vague language...

It's still nowhere near done, but I wanted to see what everyone thinks about the line work before I go any further, especially the vines. I went ahead and outlined the figure even though I think I'm going to end up drawing that part for the final version.

I really like the perspective of the woman! Can't wait to see where you are going with this!





Wanna give me your thought on my design?

This is a more finished sketch. I'm thinking the parts that are drawn with graphite will be watercolor.

Her ribs are too prominent, they look like a second set of breasts. Her stomach sags to the right. Her hair is a solid mass instead of looking like it was made of individual strands. See this tutorial

This has potential, keep working on it.



Comment on mine?

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