A "French" Onion :)



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the color palette?



im not sure what color shirt im going with. any suggestions?

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haha this awesome...good concept...just clean it up and maybe add a little more french decor





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clean it up? its pretty basic lol

I don`t think the onion needs clothes, the mustache is french enough!



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yeah clean it up and match up the styles a bit mroe between the onion and the tower in the back

i was thinking of bushes in front of the tower.. what do you think?

i'd lose the breton jersey, but keep the beret. maybe stylise the eiffel tower too.

no shirt. and a bush. i might get rid of the black outline and just have the shapes

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Cute idea, I like it, but you really need to round out the edges, make them flow better. I also think the image you've used for the Eiffel Tower may be a bit too complex for the rest of the image, maybe make a simple line drawing based off of the tower. Other than that I'm liking it, and the simplicity.



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hmm maybe i should get rid of the crossed lines on the tower?

and the onion not flat on the bottom. more of a circle? is that what you mean?

Yah maybe making the tower simpler will help bring the attention to the onion. i don't know that I'd make the botton of the onion much rounder. Flat give it a sence of gravity.



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i agree with making the tower simpler. the onion certainly makes the design!! cute idea, too!!!



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put his shirt back on. looked boring without it. tower is simpler now.

I think this is adorable. :)

i sub'd it. just for fun. we'll see. suggestions still welcome:)

bum bum bump...

oui oui

actually.. should i have him saying oui? lol

i think this is a little redundant... i don't think you need the eiffel tower... i'd work on line thicknesses variations and bolder colors. i tend to say that a lot to people, but it's because most people don't consider it...

cute! I think the shirt would read more "french" in red and white. Also I think the onion could use a few more detail lines.

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only got a 1.36 :(