Back in high school, I had a history teacher who knew next to nothing about history. We had a mnemonic to help us get through her class: "In 1492, Lincoln Sailed to the Moon."

I'm open to color and placement suggestions.

I would lower the top banner and raise the bottom banner, to tighten up the composition. I would go with browns and golds. This is really nice. If you get a chance, score and comment on my design. http://www.threadless.com/submission/198887/Watch_Your_back
Thanks

I love it.

Thanks, you were totally right about the composition. Also added some texture to the white fill. Gonna sub a different color scheme in a sec...

check the previous version for a grey color scheme.

lol very funny:D maybe a different color shirt. itd be awesome on kelly green:) or silver

So nice style! Love the colors, and I think a lot of others will too.

Feel free to shout "PRINT IT"! anytime

See you`ve got printet (nice tees!) so maybe you know if there is a score you need to get above in order to get printet? Is it posible to get a 4 and not get printet, or a 1 and get printet? Just wondering.

Feel free to shout "PRINT IT"! anytime

wait six seconds for a new color scheme

I really like the new colors even better than the old one. gives it a warmer feel and looks great on the shirt too. Do you know tha answer to the q I asked by the way?

Please feel free to shout PRINT!

re: your question, Henni, score does not explicitly determine whether a design is printed. In general, higher scores have a much better chance of being picked. I'd say that anything over a 2.8 has a pretty good chance of being printed, and anything over 3.0 almost always gets a print. I think the lowest score ever printed was somewhere around a 2.1, but that is extremely rare. Don't get your hopes up for anything under a 2.5.

Oh man I was just wondering about my score as well, damn I scored a 2.34 F#ck! Lol anyway back to your design. I think it's great, I like the second color option especially well. I dont get the mnemonic, but maybe thats just cause Im brain dead. The art is very clean, the idea is unique, and I cant find anything wrong with it. I also really like the deep orange in the center that fades out. Really cool man, good job.

Please check out my design:
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regardless of whether anyone understands the mnemonic, i don't think it will hinder the awesomeness of the actual design, so the best of luck to you i like it! please help me with mine, here thanks!

Thanks for your answer,I had been wondering about that for a time. Sorry about debating it on your critique tho, maybe its not the place. As a thanks, I just BUMPED

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Please vote 5$ and scream PRINT!

i'd wear this

this is grand, the beige/ sand works better as a colour too. i can't really see anything that needs changing, you could try out a few spot colours but i think it'd probably look better this way in the end

help me out if you can;
http://www.threadless.com/critique/38143/Dawn_Of_The_Egg
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pushed into the running...