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haha nice characters, though I don't think its putting across the idea of the other person sucking so much, maybe if they were both doing something and the other was bad at it, a poor example would be they're both playing with yoyos but the older ones managed to break his, something like that
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walmazan on Feb 28 '09 thanks for the advice my friend!
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Funny! Love the style. Miss some shadowing tho, and maybe an explenation to why he sucks. Maybe he has hole in him, or he is broken i some way?
please critique me! I can take it! Pretty please vote and comment! |
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I like the artwork...I'd agree more storytelling is need and a more disgusted look on the sock on the left.
feel free to critique mine! http://www.threadless.com/profile/902395/Sofamonkeyz/critiques |
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I love the idea and the art design. But yeah, It is not coming across as why he "socks". Maybe if their expressions were angry as if they were having a disagreement. You could have them say.. You Sock! NO! YOU SOCK!!
Like is the one with the glasses an old man sock? or is he supposed to be a geek sock? I would appreciate it if you If you could critique mine. :-) |
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I like it but agree that it needs more to the story. Maybe the one has a hole in the toe, or it could be some other article that would be in your sock drawer telling the sock that he "socks". some underwear or a pair of pantyhose. the colors and everything else are working well though.
If you get a chance I'd love some feedback. Lamb Shanks |
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He's an argyle sock..that's why he' sucks. Hahhaa
Always love your style...but yeah..gimme more background or something. A hairy leg?? |
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maybe you could add another sock to the one, so there is a pair and the other one is alone, his match got lost in the wash.
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I agree with the others that it needs alittle something extra. I love it though! I can't wait to see the changes to it :)
Please Critique mine |
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I like the art. I disagree that it needs anymore background. Adding a second white sock could be good.
I think the tail on the speech bubble needs to be pointed so its aimed at the white sock's mouth (which I would make open.) Looking forward to V2. Bath Time |
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very funny t-shirt...i agree with adding another sock in there to make a pair.
check mine out: http://www.threadless.com/critique/38544/Bird_Of_Prey |
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Poor Mr. Argyle. Your color choice and style are wonderful. The fringe at the end of the blue sock is a little better than the orange one. You can see the break in the lines on that one.
I would appreciate your opinion |
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i love this!! now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs
and dont forget to comment-thank you so much! |
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i think it works, submit
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The faces are really cute, I like it as it is
Please Score My Submission |
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The faces are really cute, I like it as it is
Please Score My Submission |
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jajajaja... i like it... jajajaja... hey, check this and help me http://www.threadless.com/critique/74678/Conception_of_a_new_conscience
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no, this is the link... sorry, http://www.threadless.com/critique/74824/Conception_of_a_new_conscience
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nice idea!
im not an artist, cant comment much on the drawings/colours combination, but it looks great to me. =) Just a suggestion here as a viewer; how about making these 2 socks you have here, a pair, quarreling. Instead of adding another white sock? Critique mine? |
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Thanks guys