I don't think there's too much text. I think that there is a lot of text does a good job of getting the point across. I don't think I see what it's on, though. Is it a phone? Or a computer screen? Or am I just stupid and incapable of top-down processing to the point that my mind is trying to make it something it's obviously not?
Clarify that, work on making it make sense, then try again.
Just one question so I realize if this will ever work or not - are people familiar with the sign "If you can read this, you're too close" on the back of trucks and similar vehicles?
Anyway, I'm sure you get the idea... All feedback is good feedback (or is it publicity?).
Thanks.