Everyone likes magic. Learn some yourself with this design. No sharp edges necessary.



C&C welcome.

sub it made me smile

You seem to like a.) lineart, and b.) hands. I think that this is a more effective submission than your deadly, deadly hands one.



Instructo-art is difficult, and this is rather effective, seeing as it's a trick that most people have known since they were age... 5ish? Anyway, I like it.



General comment: work on making your colors not clash as hard with your t-shirt colors. Because they're small lines, they tend to be a bit hard on the eyes.



I like the design, though.

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Please critique my design.



All feedback is appreciated

i think the title makes it, nice work.

I have a ready source of hands and I know how to use the pen tool =)



As far as colours go, I kind of just put a mix in my first preview and go for visibility over perfect color matching, since the colors are easy to change. Thanks for the feedback, watch this space.

I've incorporated the title to make it kind of a Fifties comic-book-ad deal. Thumbs or thumbs down?

I don't think you need a break in the line of the left index finger where the thumb is tucked behind.



Also, the outlines on the fingers of the right hand are a little too long.



Nice idea, though.

The two hands are exactly the same; I originally took a photo for both positions, but then realised that essentially it was easier to simply use Photoshop to move the top hand.



Point taken on the thumb/index line on the right lower hand.

Sorry, I meant the left hand, and I meant it as in the actual left hand. i.e. The one with the back of the hand facing me (as opposed to the one pulling the thumb). Not the version on the left or right.

no text is better. take that text off. funny shirt.

Well, so far no text is winning...I'll give it a few more hours for America to wake up and smell the t-shirts.

i dont think you could learn how to do this trick just by looking at the pictures, and that sort of kills it for me

Well, it's not really a how-to guide; the whole idea behind it is that most people know how to do this trick anyway.

Another version with no text but the better details from v2.

bump...

bump??

Yes, bump. You don't know what bump is?

I think this is ready to be submitted, I like it.



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between the thumb and pointer finger.. the line showing that they are two separate fingers is way to long.. change that and i think its golden.

I think it looks really good on the maroon-red, sweet design. As for text, I think it's neat either way

This design has been approved for submission, so those of you haven't already (and to those who have, gracias!) hop over to here and give it as many points as humanly possible. Thanks for all your comments.

you should do a design with the "stealing the nose" trick, if it hasn't been done already :)

Ooo, good one. That can be the next in the 'Hands Lineart' series.