I'm thinking about adding text, but would like to hear your thoughts on the duckee.



Thanks.

Maybe it's the flashy green or the kid-style, but something doesn't work i think....

I really think this is better, still without text. It's something between ridiculous and cool, which I think equals amusing. Does the red "fire-line" work?



I've been thinking about making the duck smaller on the shirt as well.



Let me know.



Thanks.

I much preferred the duck in the egg in the stomach to the fire, but I like the colors on the second one better. I like the black and the green t-shirts.



And I think definitely without text.



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Please critique my design



I appreciate any and all feedback!

Thanks NT,



However I do think the second version is better. I will consider the text, but thanks for your input. If there's gonna be any, it should be smart enough.



Does the light green work on the duckee?



Cheers.

i'm not very fond of that green on duckee-i think a darker shade would be better

Thanks, I think I'll change that green on v3.

oh and btw,fire in the stomach doesn't really look like fire (:

heh, ok, I see what you're getting at =)



Thanks.

Played around, found a better color for the duck, removed most part of the line, added some text ...



I think this shirt-color fits best.



Thanks for comments.