Anyone?

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I think it`s sweet. Not much to critique really.

Critique me
I can take it!

I like it...you should really add to the distress of the character though. Maybe more facial expression

If you have a second you should score my submission:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/197899/Roots

Yeah he needs more expression.... I didn't notice him till I saw the one at the bottom. Other then that it is a good idea.

Thanks for the comments, I will work on the expression and put another one up here. Do you think it would benefit from having more creatures or is it fine the way it is?

I don't think you need more creatures, I think you just need the killer to stick out a bit more. I like it!
Critique mine if you've got time
http://www.threadless.com/critique/36706/Coffee_queen

I think it's genius. We should all be so lucky to be killed by a tiny cute animal.

it might benefit from fewer characters that are slightly larger to draw more attention to the dude.

Do you think the killer needs a weapon or angry eyes or what exactly to make him stand out?

Maybe red eyes?

ya, its cool. maybe add some different eyes to the characters to change up the expression. btw, i just submitted a critique and it doesn't work! when i click on it in the critique section nothing happens. anyone know how to fix it?

nvm its working now.

Here is a slightly eviler killer

anyone?

really?

is this thing on?

haha... yeah... I wasn't getting ppl to comment on my stuff either...

i think this is pretty funny. i like the design and concept! Now, what if you had like one or two animals missing, and maybe a blood trail or body mark where they once stood. Just a thought.

will you do me a favor and check mine out, tell me what you think http://www.threadless.com/critique/37942/Kanye_is_Husky

thanks.

Cute design and colors but I don't understand the concept.

I am not sure I understand the concept. I think I was thinking about the conformity that is the world and how everyone stares at the one who is staring out at the world.

It goes downhill from there

is the gray one the killer or the killee?

What do you think?

Really interesting concept. I agree that maybe a blood trail or something would be good.
Please comment and vote on mine.
http://www.threadless.com/submission/198538/You_Complete_Me

@staffell: What was the point of that

@everyone else: I am still thinking about the blood trail business

To me, I read it as like a game of musical chairs and the one bear is being left out, like he is about to be taken to some horrible fate. I like how you changed the eyes so they are all looking at him. The colors and design is nice, I think you need to solidify what you are trying to say. Nice start. If you get a chance, my rabbit is up for voting. http://www.threadless.com/submission/198887/Watch_Your_back
Thanks

I thought it was a factory making teddybears, and one came out different that the others :-)

Feel free to shout: PRINT IT! any time!

Why is everyone happily staring at the "Killer Bear"? I kinda understand the concept but I think the overall message gets lost.

He doesn`t look that evil tho, just sad. Maybe the expression on his face could make this more clear.

Feel free to shout "PRINT IT"! anytime