whats in YOUR stomach??

i thought this would be a fun and different thing to have on a tee

design by itself.....

i did think of that... thank you i'll get to work on it now :D

I like it!

Yes, some love for the stomach.



Is that a cherry?

Ah this def has a lot of potential. Im pretty excited to see where this goes. Depending on how big it will be on the shirt, you might have to make the items in the stomach bigger. I think one bone is good enough, and you should change the other bone into something else. Im really excited to see this design progress. Very very nice (I have a feeling Im going to want to buy this shirt heh)



Thank you for commenting on my Tortoise and the Hare design. I hope you continue to support it if it gets approved for voting. I will keep an eye out on yours.

Love the colors. (the paperclip is a nice touch)

Nice, maybe another thing needs to fill that space above the apple though?

This is so hip. I like your color choices. Can we see it on a template or on a blank shirt photo again? I was thinking maybe as an illusion(for a lack of words) you could add a little esophagus up to the neck line.

I like the play on "whats in your wallet" here. But i think the stomach could have more...in it?

The colors are really nice!



pretty please

Also,if it`s a cherry it should have a longer stalk, and if it`s an apple it should be bigger in comparisan to the stomack.



pretty please with sugar on top

I like the idea but I have the feeling I've seen this same sort of idea on an already printed shirt? It was called... Don't remember but it had two holes, one at top one at bottom, with things falling through like they were going through your stomach.

ummm added some stuff in.. took out one bone..

any more ideas?

monster eyes or a shark fin type thing??

i'd play up the creature. give it bolder eyes somehow...

I agree with dannodepf, also maybe put something towards the top of the stomach?



Comment on my Version 2 please. http://www.threadless.com/critique/37633/You_Complete_Me

I think this is pretty neat. I like the tallies on the wall.

Agree with making the eye's more prominent, perhaps even some sort of mouth. like a line with a snaggle tooth?

Nice. Getting better. Im not too sure about the pencil actually. If you want it to have that toxic food look, a nice addition would be fish bone (head with skeleton). I think this is going really well, but be careful not too put too much things in the stomach or else it will get too cluttered. Heh sometimes less is more.

I didn't think I would like an "innards" design on a shirt, but this is really cute! I think it is well done, I would agree that you should make the creature a little more obvious though as I didn't see it until I read the other crits.

an apple and a pencil inside a stomach? LOL... like it!



My design has been put up in the running. Please comment and score.

Warrior's Last



Arrow

i think its ready!

THis is great. I'd say sub it.



Thanks for helping on mine.

Looks finished!





Pretty please

I updated mine again if you have the chance to check it out.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37633/You_Complete_Me

great design. may i suggest making the cherry thing darker...

Looks good. Submit

Oh man SWEEETT!!! You put the fish bones in!!!! Great man. Cant wait to vote for this. Let me know if you need more critiquing for this. I would gladly help out. Right now I really cant see anything else wrong with this.



Please support my design and vote ($5). Help promote it too if you like, I would appreciate it a lot.

Tortoise and the Hare

i like the soft colors! a bit girly for me, but its still a great design

final copy??

Yeah I think it's good. Sub!



Any thoughts on my new version?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37633/You_Complete_Me

gross! but awesome

haha nice.



i'd sub it!

I seriously love this shirt. I'd buy it :)



take a looksie pleeease -

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37667/How_to_Ask_a_Girl_Out#lastcomment

hah loves it!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/37607/nevermore



http://www.threadless.com/critique/37729/human_flower

Looks great! Send it up to the Threadless Gods. Good luck!



Critique me please!

submitted it :D

waiting for approval now...

Awesome let me know when it is up for voting. Definetly want to vote for this shirt.

will do :D

i hope it goes through!!

good one

:D thanks

Nice job. If you get a chance, http://www.threadless.com/critique/37740/Watch_Your_back

Thanks

up for voting now

here



:D

real cute idea, nicely done



please vote

http://www.threadless.com/submission/198487/Nerd_Ammo_Belt

Mine's up for voting now, if you have the time.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/198538/You_Complete_Me#lastcomment

haha! this is nice! submit!

up for voting here