Hey all!

I really want to do a kids shirt - with a lil tooth as the tooth sheriff, floss lasso and toothpaste in the holster... maybe a toothbrush cactus in the distance...



I thought I'd start with a critique on this guy to really help get the design off the ground.



feel free to lay down any thoughts or ideas on me(including title)!



Thanks!

bumper car

rubber baby bumpers

fleshin him out a bit.



thoughts comments?

like pulling teeth!



any feedback or thoughts are appreciated



Thanks

bumpity bump

i like this idea and design but maybe try factoring in tooth decay or some kind of mouth related disease for him to rustle up and/or lasso

also what do you think of him riding a toothbrush "horse" akin to the ones kids play with (a horse head on a stick)

I like squidspawn's ideas. This is a great concept. Maybe have him have already pulled a tooth with the lasso?



Crit mine if you have time please.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37302/Well_This_Is_Unexpected

Thanks... I really like the toothbrush horse idea...

nope. doesnt need anything else. submit it now. i definately like the style

thanks and thanks!

I think the floss box should be a little larger to make the joke less subtile (you can miss it). Also, I'm not sure about the direction of the boot in the front, don't you think it should be pointing forward?



by the way, I have some new stuff to critique here

The shading is excellent. I agree, bigger floss box. The way that the floss flows seems a little wonky as well. Mostly the way is wobbles against the flow of the rope before it hits that first turn. It's rad, keep it up



I would appreciate your opinion

awesome... thanks!

I think it would be better with two legs

i'm thinking two as well... thanks !

give a shout! thanks!

I thinks it's ready^^ Nice work.



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please comment on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37743/Music_to_my_Heart

Bomb diggity this has made aweomse progression

thanks!

Geez...he's adorable. This should be a kid's shirt for certain.



Critique me!

Very nice! This has come a long way. My favourite is the little bottle of toothpaste in his holster. Looks great!

my aim was for a kids shirt... so thanks!... and yeah the paste (and the lil boots) are my favorite parts!

any other shouts or thoughts on this guy before he gets subbed? holla!

Give that tooth he's lasso-ing a curly mustache and a black top hat!

Haha i couldn't resist.



But it looks awesome as is.

there ya go! thats the little horse I was talking about for him to ride (I was thinking it would be a toothbrush not a horse but still nice) my only problem is that why is a tooth lassoing another tooth...

great work though.

he has a toothbrush mane! and I guess he's lassoing with floss so he should be on the job taking care of the grill!

Love it.



Could you please critique Squid Medallion? That'd be rad!

tee mock up on the kiddies!

Haha wow I havent checked out this design in a while. Damn it looks a lot better on a shirt than I initially though. Very cool man.



Please take a look at my new design. (Please be brutal, as I don't know if this type of shirt would appeal to anyone on this site). Thank you.

Red, Black and Blue

thnaks.. Anybody else? any reason for the don't submit this vote?

Looks really good, but I might add some small contour details to the top or sides so that it's more instantly recognizeable as a molar.

defined out the top of the tooth abit... but I dont know about his face... happy to be a lassoin' or concentrating on rustlin' ?



Thoughts

i like the expression to the right for sure ^_^



maybe add some of that sketchy texture to the boots also, but looks cool so far ^_^



If you have the time -

well he's been subbed!



Thanks for everybody's help from concept to sub, I appreciate it!



Check him out right here! Thanks!

whoops! how about RIGHT HERE!