Thieving Mr. Magpie.

The design is pretty good. Will it be confined in the circular frame?



Please comment on my design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37287/Tortoise_and_the_Hare

Your design is well done, and I think the concept is solid. What color shirt are you thinking of putting it on?

i would definetly change the color background to something darker to give the impression of a light

Thank you for the kind comment on my design. I do want to give you a word of warning though. There is an unwritten rule around these parts not to advertise your critiques, designs or slogans on other people's designs when they are in the running. I wanted to let you know before you get a hostile response from others. Anyway, while I'm here I'd recommend not constraining your design to a boundary like that. Make the shirt sky blue and get rid of the circle.

Umm, this is really cool even though I don't get the concept.



Critique Mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37342/Roots#v3

I really like it, but I feel like there's a little too much going on in the background. Also, I wanna see what this would look like on a shirt.

Version II, based on constructive comments :)

Nice improvements, but I'm not a huge fan of the square edg at the bottom - maybe break it up with some more leaf/grass shapes.



Check mine if you have time:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/37240/Looks_like_rain

Fill the shirt more.

Version III, bigger on the T-Shirt, minus the bottom straight line. Any other help is much appreciated. :)

This is headed in the right direction as far as breaking up that boxiness/border thing you have going but it's not quite there yet.

Any ideas? I don't want to crowd the bottom of the image so the focus is on the bird etc. I'm going to sleep on it, so any more help is very much appreciated. In the morning, I will probably push this into the running.

COuld the bird hold the loot by a draw string, maybe. New version of my critique POWER WALK, please check it out.

if you look at V2 you can see it a bit clearer. anyone else have any opinions, as i have 3 SUBMIT's and no NEED'S MORE WORK. I will give it till the morning.

Post a blog about it in the main forum. You'll get better quality help there. The printed designers don't hang out in the critiques too much.

I might think about making the money bag a tad bigger

try it on a navy blue or black shirt so the flood light looks more real and you can play with shadows more--



definitely has a ton of potential!



Please vote on my latest submission:






Punching Kitty

try using darker shirt like what Ellogoods said...it's a good concept...keep at it.