Alright heres the updated version. The last post messed up a bit and I had to take it down. Heres Version 2.

Thanks for all your comments and critiques....... right?

Any Critiques anyone?

hey! i really like this design, it looks really cool but there's just a couple minor things i'd change. The water droplet on his hand looks a little funky but that might just be the pic, and his umbrella might look better with a point at the top, right now it looks like one of those huge garden umbreallas. Unless thats what your going for then its great. I like how the cloud is slanted though, good call!

the rain looks kinda like arrows towards the end.

Thanks for the suggestions, I'll get on that soon and post a newer version!

I really really like this design but the robot bugs me, he's short and stubby and kind of bulky.



I like the rain cloud and umbrella though

Someone is trying to steal my idea without giving credit -

http://www.threadless.com/critique/3985/Robot_Love



Shame on them!

Just a few changes... Added puddle and hopefully the splashes are more clear. C and C welcome!

there that was exactly what it needed! awesome job and i hope it does well!

very cute!

wouldn't the puddle of water make him go haywire..?

For some reason I want some shortcircuiting going on, with yellow electricity thingos. It's a little uninteresting at the moment.

I do feel that there could be something added to this, but I don't really agree with the short circuiting. It's kinda peaceful right now (especially with the lt. blue).

I dont want to short out the lil guy. Any other suggestions would be super cool!

Hey.... remember this?

Haha, I want to put the final touches on this critique and submit it. Any suggestions? Thanks for the critiques and comments!

Try makin' it a little smaller - same postition though.

The latest episode in the cute robot with umbrella series. Critiques are most welcome!

Any ideas? or do you think its good to go? Thanks again!

TOASTER!

Any more ideas? placement? color? comments? critiques? submit?

Check out my other critique as well - http://www.threadless.com/critique/3914/What_if_they_fought#v6

Maybe try taking the stroke off the puddles, but looks good so far!

haha i like the toaster buddy. but the stroke looks kinda blurry

so great...submit!

I like the stroke on the puddles if you clear it up, and I ADORE the toaster.

OH NO! Robo and Toasty are STILL stuck in the rain!

Heres a close up and a few changes, thanks to the critiques.

Looks pretty good on: banana, classic pink, and light blue. Suggestions?

Comments and Critiques welcome! Thanks

i really like this!



just an idea, but what about like a electric shock where he is getting hit to show he really doesnt like the rain?



not that its really needed.. id buy it as is.

Looks awesome

Shocking!

Electricity or no electricity? Comments? Critiques? Which version would be best to submit?

wow! This has really come a long way - it looks fantastic!! I love the little pet toaster :)

I think I like it a tiny bit better without electricity but I would buy it either way. Nice Job!

hrm.. actually i liked it better without the electricity.

no electricity, i think, because if then it wouldnt make sense for his foot to be okay if he is standing in a puddle.

and i think you should add shadowing to make the toaster look like it is standing, at first i thought it was jumping into the air.

but GREAT JOB! i LOVE IT!

no sparks. looks great. keep it up.

idk, i kinda like the sparks. but the pet toaster is absolutely what makes this sub.

m

o, and i have some new crits up, if you wanna take a look.

Looks tight. The sparks kind of take the light and humorous tone fo the previoous design and make it a bit more ominious, wheras before it seemd the robot was worried about rust, now he seems menaced with total destruction. I prefer the lighter tone, but thats up to you.

I say submit v5. The spark directs the eye downward like the direction of the rain.



v4 (without the spark) is very trendy and au courant with the darker look, but the spark gives it a more classic look -- plus some visual interest.

Alright. No Electricity wins!

Ready to submit?

yea! This looks great - submit already :)

cute

and i love the toaster!

Alright.. I'll be submitting this version real soon! Thanks for the help everyone and don't forget to vote!

....Approval Pending....

toaster's my favorite

waiting.. waiting.. remember to vote when this goes gold! thanks everyone!

Hey Everyone!

Check it out and VOTE!

RIGHT HERE

i like it

I really like it! Just be careful about the placing, so that half of the robot isn't going to be hidden by the wearers arm. :P



This' really come a long way, and tbh, I'd buy that. *votes*