...and that's how we get raisins. I was looking at a box of raisin bran and this came to mind. The sun is pretty fleshed out, but the concept needs a little help. I feel the idea is solid, but how can I carry this out more effectively?

Raisins are brown.

yea the sun is pretty nice, im not sure how u can help the raisins. maybe play with placement.

Well, they are raisins yes, but they are grapes being dried out by the sun here, hence the running. I thought maybe they needed a color change though. Basically, I want to know how can I make it more dynamic?

Cool idea! I think it would help your design a lot if you clarified a little about whether those are grapes or raisins.. them being just kind of withered is confusing.. also it might help to give them faces too :)

Hilarious

I had this same idea after I did my most recent sub .. nice work

Most Xcellent

looking forward to this sub



maybe have some grape vine, and grapes jumping off

This reminds me of the robot chicken short. "TWO SCOOPS"

Great idea. I think you need something to show that the sun is actually chasing them, maybe changing the angle of the sun or the placement of the scoops.

Then put more grapes or raisins, maybe some running onto the back of the shirt.

Too bright...

The raisins aren't visible enough (I'd prefer to be able to see expressions on them - the sun's expression is quite funny).



Cute concept, though.

Well crap, I double posted it thanks to an error. Anyway, here is my latest, with some color changes and a redo of the raisins. I also tilted the sun a little more. I'm not done with it, I just want some feedback from you guys. Thanks.

That's much better. But! How about having 'healthy' grapes in the foreground, with 'dead' raisin comrades lying behind them - too slow to escape the Sun's fiery wrath? =)

That's a good idea! I'll play around with that, thanks!

I like the raisins better here. Maybe have some trampled too. Angle of the sun is better, looks more menacing, but needs something else.

Yeah, I agree. I plan to add some more um, raisin people or whatever, but it feels like it needs some kind of environment...ideas?

LMAO! Loving the raisins. A squished one trampled by the others would be cool!

How about either a vineyard, so you could have grapes fleeing down the aisles of vines, or a cornfield a la North By Northwest

Freaking awesome. I'd buy it.

I think it's great, that's such a good idea, and really funny too.

Thanks! I'm hoping I get to work on it some more soon and sub it, it's been kinda slow going for me and my threadless stuff lately!