...and that's how we get raisins. I was looking at a box of raisin bran and this came to mind. The sun is pretty fleshed out, but the concept needs a little help. I feel the idea is solid, but how can I carry this out more effectively?
Well, they are raisins yes, but they are grapes being dried out by the sun here, hence the running. I thought maybe they needed a color change though. Basically, I want to know how can I make it more dynamic?
Cool idea! I think it would help your design a lot if you clarified a little about whether those are grapes or raisins.. them being just kind of withered is confusing.. also it might help to give them faces too :)
Great idea. I think you need something to show that the sun is actually chasing them, maybe changing the angle of the sun or the placement of the scoops.
Then put more grapes or raisins, maybe some running onto the back of the shirt.
Well crap, I double posted it thanks to an error. Anyway, here is my latest, with some color changes and a redo of the raisins. I also tilted the sun a little more. I'm not done with it, I just want some feedback from you guys. Thanks.
That's much better. But! How about having 'healthy' grapes in the foreground, with 'dead' raisin comrades lying behind them - too slow to escape the Sun's fiery wrath? =)