Mm... Result of mucking around in Photoshop for a bit. Comments?

try without outlines and make the black dots dark orange or somethin'

still it's cute (:

Outlines on the sun? Sure thing, I'll give it a go...

Version 2... Without outline, and with orange spots, like suggested. ...Not sure which one i like more... Thoughts on this please?

i really like the change here, would it be on a white shirt? bottom corner placement?

j/w since thats how it was with v1

ah,yes...mutch better... (:

i think it's great for a kids tee

yeah... i was thinking same placement as the first version, like you can see in the top left corner of the design.... yeah or no?

i like it there but maybe you should try to put it on the top-just to see how it looks

So the spots start at the shoulder then come across?

yeah

Aiight then... New Version on the Tee.

no... it looks much better on the bottom

Yeah thats what i thought. i thought about continuing the dots [on this particular placement] down to the bottom of the tee, but i reckon thatd be a bit much.

Hmm ok heres another. What dyou think of the cloud? Too much?

looks cute!

this one is the best

Sun is sick!

Fix up the cloud. You got that slight detail on the sun. Do something to make it more obious as a cloud.

Love version 4! Submit that!

Thanks doodle! Still not too sure about that cloud though?

Question: How do you do a fill with the dots, rather than put them in manually?

Could you lot put some constructive crits into this please. It's my daughters design - she accidently posted it under my login thinking she was on her own. She's only young but very smart and she LOVES designing and drawing (which is actively encouraged in this house!) Give her some ideas please! (And I'll make sure she puts her next one up under her own name - sorry about that). Be nice!

Unashamedly bumping it! Hey what can I say - mothers love.