This is a simulated process design.

A white dove of peace rising from the flames of war.

this is really cool. It is a little difficult to make out the dove. Maybe a little more contrast between the flames and the dove?

Very etherial.



I just wish it filled the shirt more. Is that possible with simulated process?

i could not tell that there was a dove until i read the description but it looks really good even when i didnt see the dove

please critique mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/36943/Sublime

i agree i think you need a little contrast more than you have now this is very unique and pleasing to the eye tho!



keep going with it.



SCORE ME PLEASE.! AND LEAVE A NICE COMMENT!

It's beautiful! are you sure you are within the color limits for submitting? Agree with the size of the dove statements. Keep up the good work.



I'd appreciate a glance

The Great Rocking

More clearly defined dove.

I added a place to escape to; like clouds and sky - sort of.

And I made the flames at the bottom (left) redder.

I also made the design to cover the whole front of the shirt.

This is crazy cool

Better

My model changed his shirt to blue. I think it shows the design much better.

Bump.

I like the design. Would you be against making the flame stand out more and be a more detailed flame. I say this only because it still looks like brush strokes to me (unless this was the style you were going for, then it is fine the way it is). Other than that I actually took 2 minutes trying to decide which color shirt I like this design on and I couldnt lol it looks good on both blue and orange.



You were really helpful with the comments you left me for my Tortoise and Hare design. I just put version 5 up. I would appreciate it if you could check it out and leave a comment. Thank you.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37287/Tortoise_and_the_Hare#v5

These are very abstract flames. Not really flames at all, just swirls of warm, bright colors suggesting fire.

I like this a lot. I think maybe a slight vignette at all the edges would look sweet. Even though it's gorgeous I feel like a little bit of roughing up will make this shirt look less juvenile. Of course these are just musings from a less talented artists and if you disagree with my suggestions I'd say you're ready to submit.



If you have a chance:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37342/Roots

i think it looks cool...i would make the bird take up a lot more space. see what it looks like.

does the bird's neck-headline look a bit twisted? beside that, i love this! have you tried it on maybe grey or black?

maybe not, a a blue t-shirt?

may be t-shirt must be more dark.

Your wish is my command.

I prefer the blue background of V3 because blue and orange are complementary colors that are more vibrant when juxtaposed. I could compromise on navy blue happily.

I made the dove larger on the model's shirt to see how that looks without doing all the work necessary to change the design. What do you think?

I personally like the larger dove on the model, it makes a nice focal point. I also like the darker shirt since it makes the design "pop" where the orange it blends in, and the blue is a bit hurtful to my eyes at least.



Overall I would wear this shirt :]

I would definitely wear this shirt! Great job!

Wow! what a cool looking shirt design! Send it off to the Threadless Gods now!



Critique me pelase!

I like this shirt better. I didnt like the bright blue before, I dont know why but race cars, and tony the tiger cereal boxes came to life.

Wow, this has developed beautifully. The dove stands out so much more clearly and seems to come from the fire without being on fire. Tricky. I think its ready.



I would appreciate your opinion

Def better on black. I liked the design on the blue and would have thought about getting it as a print but a design on black..... I would get it as a shirt. Nice work.



Thanks for the comments you left me on my shirt design. It is up for scoring please support my Tortoise and the Hare design.

This is the one going to be subbed tonight.

Nice Ill be looking out for it in the next few days. Thank you for the help on my design and thank you for supporting it, at least i hope you did :) Thanks again Francesa

Okay, this is being subbed as "Rise Above the Flames".

Watch for it in a few days.