I like the design. Would you be against making the flame stand out more and be a more detailed flame. I say this only because it still looks like brush strokes to me (unless this was the style you were going for, then it is fine the way it is). Other than that I actually took 2 minutes trying to decide which color shirt I like this design on and I couldnt lol it looks good on both blue and orange.
You were really helpful with the comments you left me for my Tortoise and Hare design. I just put version 5 up. I would appreciate it if you could check it out and leave a comment. Thank you.
I like this a lot. I think maybe a slight vignette at all the edges would look sweet. Even though it's gorgeous I feel like a little bit of roughing up will make this shirt look less juvenile. Of course these are just musings from a less talented artists and if you disagree with my suggestions I'd say you're ready to submit.
I prefer the blue background of V3 because blue and orange are complementary colors that are more vibrant when juxtaposed. I could compromise on navy blue happily.
I made the dove larger on the model's shirt to see how that looks without doing all the work necessary to change the design. What do you think?
I personally like the larger dove on the model, it makes a nice focal point. I also like the darker shirt since it makes the design "pop" where the orange it blends in, and the blue is a bit hurtful to my eyes at least.
Wow, this has developed beautifully. The dove stands out so much more clearly and seems to come from the fire without being on fire. Tricky. I think its ready.
Def better on black. I liked the design on the blue and would have thought about getting it as a print but a design on black..... I would get it as a shirt. Nice work.
Thanks for the comments you left me on my shirt design. It is up for scoring please support my Tortoise and the Hare design.
Nice Ill be looking out for it in the next few days. Thank you for the help on my design and thank you for supporting it, at least i hope you did :) Thanks again Francesa
A white dove of peace rising from the flames of war.