V1, any help? special ink, colors, placement, etc?

please comment

any comments?

any help please?

yeah, thanks, I'm not sure about adding elements in the background....

maybe I can add... some element... maybe an oldschool computer? in the back of the shirt

what about the colors? (I'm not sure about the thunder belt)

any other help?

I agree with the addition of oldschool background. Hmm the thunder belt.... I don't have any complaints about it but, if there is anything more iconic of 'oldschool' genre than go with that, but for now the thunder is fine. Hmmm how bout making his legs slightly thicker, maybe the same thickness as the tentacles would be good.



Please crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37287/Tortoise_and_the_Hare

and what about the placement... any suggestion?

haha, I like the style, I think you just need more small in the placement, and I think work better in sand!

yeah I think sand works better to...

any other suggestion?

I like it. I cannot see any way to improve it. Submit. Very cute.



If you get the chance...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37343/FrancoFun

another feedback?

Love it...great character! hmm, only comment I have is that it's a bit big on the shirt, just scaled down a bit then I'm good with it...submit! nice work!



Have a look at mine..

pepper shaker

cookie monstert

New placement and tee color option

Please comment

gracias seņoritosss

any other help amigos?

mmmhhh... nothing?

I like it, have you got the coolers slightly off centre on purpose? Because it works (apologies if thats not the case!)

yes on purpose, It looks nice right?

hoola!

i like it on the sand colored shirt

Yeah...the placing is better now,better slightly off centre ,prefer the smaller version...the gray and sand t-shirts work best for me...



as to your question: to create the links...in the "allowed HTML:" box next to the comment box, click on the "a href" (it doesnt give you a pointer or aanything,just click on it) this will then place the html into the comments (usually about a line down,just check for it), then all you need is to copy the url for your design (www..../..../) into the html line where it says http://... and then you can also name the link in the "link text" next to that...then just post comment and that's that...hope thats clear...



check out mine

Pepper Shaker V2

I'd like it if the colors were bolder.

Oh man this is where this shirt went! I was looking for this and was wondering if you actually did make that positional change. And you did! Great! The legs are still thinned but I guess if no one else is complaining about that then that is just a personal thing. I like it, nice job.



Please check out my final version. This is the image that will be sent for submission

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37287/Tortoise_and_the_Hare

yeah gracias.... uuummm I like the legs thiner, they emphasize the "geek look"

(thanks PBOt for the tip)

needs a bandaid on the glasses. where is his pocket protector or watch with a calculator on it?

yeah, the bandaid, thats a good one RAD, thanks

That's one crazy cool character. I like the placement and I think the sand color shirt is working for me best.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/37100/Imperial_walker

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37510/Killa_fashion

the drawing is really good, but not much is happening really. but yeah, the placement is spot on for the character. I just wish more was going on. If i had to score it now, id give it about a 3 or 2

mmm yeah.... You're right, I'm gonna work to add something more to the illustration (computer, videogame, pic, or something like that)

hehe Gracias por las remendaciones carnalitos