I already know of a few revisions I'm going to make to this design but I wanted to get some more feedback from the community.



Current Plans:

• Fix the Clouds so they all don't look like the same cloud repeated over and over.

• Create a flash presentation before submitting it.

i think the overall idea is awesome!!! it looks really good

Here is a link to see the design larger. Detail Image Page. The only difference is that I added some distress to the clouds on the current version shown above.

it looks really good. try spreading the clouds out a little more around the shirt. They look all bunched together at the bottom. Otherwise, it looks pretty great.

I see the ring and pin missing, which means armed but the spoon and top of the handle should be tilted a bit more. Excellent

illustration of the old Mk 1 pineapple!

really nice an simple, would make the very top cloud not touch the top of the shirt though

Looks awesome. I actually would fade the green of the grenade a little bit to be more complementary to the blue of the shirt.



Awesome though - creates a lot of anticipation

Can you make the grenade look more like it's inside the balloon and not just stuck on top of it?

mezo Yes, I can.

I'd abandon the grenade inside the balloon idea--instead, I'd put the grenade in a flock of balloons and tied to a string, so it "looks" like a balloon but really truly is about to pop. I think it'd make the idea a lot more palpable and distinct. I'm just not buying the grenade inside the balloon.



Crit me?

plausible or not this is the concept and it is the way I'm going with it. Thanks.