Just a fun design for a kids tee.
Any comments appreciated.

little sloppy, its pretty cool except the pipe is little big... but overall pretty good

Since its for a kids tee, maybe have bubbles coming out of the pipe so as not to seem to be promoting smoking

yes bubbles is good, and make the duck smaller and have a trail of bubbles stretching horizontally across the front of the shirt.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/3686/Herders

Thanks for the input..the smoking/kids thing didn't even cross my mind.

I worked on this a little to make it more "sketchy"
Also added some bubbles.
Was thinking about making the bubbles into a question mark shape...
And possibly the title of the design in foamy looking letters underneath?
Any feedback appreciated.

bump.

Looks pixely and weird.

It went kind of pixely when i scaled it down to fit on the template.
It's supposed to look faded.

yeah, I think just un fade it

i like this design alot! but the fading adds colors right? idk its very cute! i'd have to order this in a 12 so i can wear it and be all cute...

Fix up the pixely bits. Like its just oddly more harsh in some spots

looks like its been washed too many times.

Too much fade effect -- use it wisely!