I like the style of this one, maybe change the colour of the text, and scale the artwork just a little.



Would you like to give me some advice as well? http://www.threadless.com/critique/36665/Samsara

scale bigger or smaller?

crazy artwork...but maybe too busy?

You know what? I like this. Looks good on the guy, but, I think you need to scale down some of the lines, they are just a little too thick in places.

looks great! a bit flashy for my taste, but I wouldn't scale it. trendier folks than I would love it :)

thanks guys will try to work on it more... thanks again