rocks, i love the little scribbly bit in the word private. Maybe you shouldwork on the rays coming out of the "eye" though.

thanks man, what would you suggest for the rays?

less is more.. just have lines coming out not so much a mish-mash of stuff as rays...

pretty cool!

check my critiques too please :)

I like the idea and I love the way you scribbled out part of the "private". Perhaps a texture beneath the design all over the tee? and maybe a muted color on a colored tee? :) Would create a little more balance and make it more interesting as a whole.