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icebar on May 30 '07
haha i just subbed this by accident. sent an email. argh so stupid.
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shesJACK on May 30 '07
are those clouds?
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icebar on May 30 '07
well yes lol
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icebar on May 30 '07
i could add more.
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shesJACK on May 30 '07
omg duh i didnt read the title.
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icebar on May 30 '07
still, you should be able to recognize them w/o the title, you know?
what should i do? |
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shesJACK on May 30 '07
sorry im a little retarded today.
i like the horse and the girl. but the clouds should look more ... cloudy? (: |
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shesJACK on May 30 '07
hahah iuno how youd go about it, maybe make the edges more round??
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icebar on May 30 '07
yeah. i did kind of like my style, though.
ok did you mean the real clouds, or the chariot thing, or what? it's ok if you don't want to help anymore. :) |
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icebar on May 30 '07
oh by the way, it may look like she's smoking but she's blowing thru a bubble stick!
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icebar on May 30 '07
bumping this before i go.
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shesJACK on May 30 '07
hmmm, the lines inside the chariot cloud mabobber thing is all thats bothering me. but hey if its your style do whatchaa want. (:
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icebar on May 30 '07
no no i understand. idk why i put them there, i'll fix it. thanks!
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kingforaday on May 30 '07
make the horses cart look more like a covered wagon, with out the cover
and fix up the horses wings a smige |
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icebar on May 30 '07
covered wagon without the cover, lol?
well, i'll figure it out. ok yeah i did the wings quickly because i realized i had forgotten them. |
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icebar on May 30 '07
proud to say i did this in appleworks :)
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kingforaday on May 30 '07
i mean like an old fashion wagon lol
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icebar on May 30 '07
like a kid's red wagon?
i wanted it to be like a chariot. cuz we got pegasus. |
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icebar on May 30 '07
granted i didn't even make it look like a chariot, it's just a clump of white stuff.
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kingforaday on May 30 '07
noo nooo... like a wooden wagon from the 1800's
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icebar on May 30 '07
picture needed!
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kingforaday on May 30 '07
http://www.victorialodging.com/saanichfair/images/saanich-fair-wooden-wagons.jpg
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kingforaday on May 30 '07
not exactly what i wanted but close enough
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icebar on May 30 '07
ok i might try that. thanks.
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icebar on May 30 '07
bump
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icebar on May 31 '07
bump
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icebar on May 31 '07
sorry, but last bump.
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doctordeirdre on May 31 '07
i just dont like farty, poopy designs
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icebar on May 31 '07
wonderful news for me
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I like it!
the horses wings should look more winged :) llike this what king said about the wagon is right, think Spartacus! the clouds should look more rounder, bubblier the girl looks more detailed compared to the rest wich is ok, just make sure the details don't get lost. I am anxious to see the next version you go girl! |
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less farty poopy is the suggestion I guess....
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icebar on May 31 '07
i am currently fixing the wings, thanks.
i will also change the wagon, yes. thanks bart :) |
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icebar on May 31 '07
ok i'm gonna take out some of the lines for the fartiness? i guess.
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the doctor should go see a doctor..
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icebar on May 31 '07
the doctor should have had a little more to her comment than what she had.
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now I am feeling all poopy & farty
thanks alot Doc! |
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icebar on May 31 '07
oh also i am adding more clouds to make it more clear that they are in fact clouds, not farts, marshmellows, or smokestacks. :)
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icebar on May 31 '07
*marshmallows
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grey was a good choice, central placement pls
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icebar on May 31 '07
thanks a lot bart, you've been of the utmost help.
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oh and maybe you can turn the cloud she blows/puffs into a bunch of little clouds.
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cARtOoNer on May 31 '07
i kinda like the lower placement, dont know if the design portion is quite there yet though
I commented on yours, now CHECK OUT MINE! |
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icebar on May 31 '07
ok thanks guys
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kingforaday on May 31 '07
i wanna see v2!
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icebar on May 31 '07
sorry it'll be done tomorrow. i don't have time just now.
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kingforaday on May 31 '07
now go see mine :)
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yo ice send me a mail sometime..
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icebar on May 31 '07
sure
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icebar on Jun 01 '07
uh sorry i posted that twice.
it wasn't working, or so i thought. my commentary was: "i couldn't finish the rest of my changes today, but i did fix the wings... so here they are." |
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doodlebugbby on Jun 02 '07
I don't like this design...
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fouchnickens on Jun 02 '07
The horse's snout is too dog-like. It needs more height.
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icebar on Jun 02 '07
ok guys... ok
uh do you think it would be better if the girl was riding the horse? doodlebugbby, i might not like it either, but it's for a contest and it's all i could think of. |
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stereochromic on Jun 02 '07
You really shouldn't submit a design you don't even like yourself, honestly.
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icebar on Jun 02 '07
i didn't say that! jeeze.
and again, its for a contest!!! so... riding the horse? opinions please... |
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
should i use another gray to do the shadows, or not?
as you can see i completely changed where the girl was. this is not finished at all. i still have to do details and many clouds around them. |
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
bump. please comment a bit?
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nice!
I'd give the clouds a more bubblier look but that's it :) |
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
alright..
and should i use the light gray color? |
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I wouldn't add shadows
if you're saying light gray for background, fine just see for yourself, maybe a light blue back just to see what it does? |
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
ok.
might be a bit tough on the program i'm using though. haha |
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hahaha
damn Alice I wish you'd trow those shitsoftware in the bin illustrator is endlessly much easier and quicker |
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
yes yes
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hehe for real
for example adjusting the backgroundcolor would recuire two simple clicks =-) |
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
stop making me depressed lol
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
the only thing is that now it looks like she has wings. she's not supposed to, that's the horse's back wing.
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TreeFiddy on Jun 04 '07
ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh looks real choppy honestly.
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icebar on Jun 04 '07
i know, i know...
choppy program, choppy design? hahah.. |
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now go comment my critique :)
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icebar on Jun 06 '07
i'm gonna say the ink is GOLD and SILVER on this one.
wouldn't that be pretty? i'm getting towards the deadline with this, and i'm not going to make that many more changes if i can help it. |
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icebar on Jun 06 '07
ok any last thoughtses?
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icebar on Jun 06 '07
if no one comments by tonite i'm subbing it!
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icebar on Jun 06 '07
buuuuuuump
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my theme is "It's done with magic", so i tried this.
how is it? anything else i should do before subbing?
thank you.