Colorful Fishies!!!

I like it, it's very Warhol.

Try getting more creative with the placement and number of fishies. The two red ones are facing the same direction, for example. If you are going to have multiple fish of the same color you should definitely get a better variety of placement.



Check out my critique, Wedges.

i like the colours and placement, but i don't enjoy the fact that its all the same fish...sorry. if they were different, i'd be happier. i like the contrast of colours with the b/g colour tho. pretty.



critique mine too, please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36610/torn

I really like the style of the fish. I agree about the placement though. Also, does this have more than 8 colors? It's hard to tell since it's kind of small. :)

Not sure about this. You've got two totally different styles for the fish, and then the design in the background doesn't seem ot fit with either....

What if it was just the fancy goldfish with the ornate line work coming off of its tail and turning into the swirls in the water behind him?



If you get a chance I'd love some feedback. Lamb Shanks

vast improvement-

this is definitely worth submitting but maybe do one more tweak and then decide-






Punching Kitty part 2 please critique

i love the colors for the v1 because it's called rainbow fish but there's no rainbow here :( maybe with the goldfish draw it in a diff position and replace the other fish you've added here like a looking in a pond of rainbow fish, i would even stick with the grey before made your colors look brighter... sorry i love rainbows and colors :) i'd so buy the one before this.

neeeeeds a lot more detail

look incomplete to me.. It feels empty...



Check mine

[RAWR]

.. what about adding bubbles?



Feedback is welcome

i prefer the 1st version

I think moving towards less repetition was a good one. I think there's still a little too much repeating of the same fish in the upper left.



I would appreciate your opinion

it feels like there are three separate designs on the search i thin it needs more unity. and i would like to see some of the color on the bottom fish used accents in the top school of fish for balance.



Please critique my design



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47588/gloomy#v2



and



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47597/Pick_up_the_Pieces



thank you!