How rain is made :)

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Taht's cute.

The drops of rain are way too straight and symmetrical. I dont like it. I think you should free style them, like you did in the clouds.



crit mine?

ok, thanx for the insight! taking it into consideration!

nice idea, i think u make the rain straight and symmetrical for a more graphical effects? not too bad! in my opinion... anyway u can try out with other colors combination :) good job

EXACTLY. i didnt wanna make hand drawn, uneven lines for the reason being, the whole design is somewhat symmetrical.

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cute! but his tail bothers me. I think it might look better at its beginning if you echoed the smoother way his neck attaches to the body.



the way you placed the feet by cutting out the grass blades is cool...have you tried doing the same a couple of times where his tail touches the ground? like, starting at that point you added to the tail under the rear foot, between the 6th &7th piece of grass (counting from left to right)? it might end up looking too busy but I think it would be worth a try.

clever. i love the simplicity. great job.you may not even need the plain.



ANY LAST MINUTE CHANGES?

could something get rained on?

changed it

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i changed the name of it to.....



SHOWER TIME

SHOWER TIME

Like the idea. I would try to make it look like he is biting the cloud more. Maybe put a little bit in front of him so it looks like he is biting it.

Cutting Remark

OK! i added some cloud in front of the face and gave baby dino buck teeth!!

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That looks a lot better. The buck teeth are also a nice effect. You should submit it.

woo hoo! thanx a million! waiting to see if i could get more "submit this" votes!

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this is better! I'm still thinking about it...but don't wait on me or anything. I'm a muller.

haha, looking good dude!

I like it. I think it's clever and I like the teeth!



I do think it would look smoother if you rounded the top of the dinos heads. But that's not a big deal. Over all I like it. I think you are ready =]



If you have a chance, check out my design. Let me know what you think =]

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Thanks guys!

getting nicer! keep it up. look forward to see your stuff

should i change their heads?