Is the text too much? Let me know what you think.

Thanks.

Does threadless automatically decide if it's a kid's print?

How about the shirt color? Would it look better on blue.

The text is not too much. It's ok.

Maybe you could just pull away the title from the (cute) cakes because your illustration is a little bit too compact.



I hope you'll understand my words... i'm french...

Thanks.

Okay, I tried to space it out more.

This looks like total Threadless fodder. Submit it.



Crit me: http://www.threadless.com/critique/36558/Imperial_Walker

I'd probably drop all the text, but that's just me. I think the cupcakes do a good enough job telling the story of the image.



Critiques encouraged on Shadow of a Saint

Submit submit!!!!! keep the text



Crit mine here

question... i see for v1 it's a more washed out version of v2. i was wondering how you prevented the picture from becoming washed out. every time i save my design for web, photoshop just shifts the color to something more washed out

I saved my .jpeg using Coreldraw. It looked real washed out, so I just tweaked the levels and saturation in Photoshop.

this is so cute! i like how you have the cupcakes overlapping on the bottom pic...i think you should do that on the tee

Help me out?

Yeah, I like that too. I'd have to shrink everything to get it to fit.

BUMP.

My cute neighbor modeled for me.

great kids shirt. "mmm freshly baked" too much? Like the other type though, and scrolly clouds. Otherwise, I'd say pretty much ready for submitting. Nice work.



http://www.threadless.com/profile/596393/R_Thull

i just think if u can lose those words and let the action speak for itself would be much better...aside from the nicely drawn cupcakes and cloud maybe u need to think of what u want them to do in this piece of work instead of jus flying around, i guess. :)

nice really clean work, would def buy for my daughter. :) no suggestion I think its ready

hey this is great! sub it!

mmmm looks yummmy...

Great Design! good job!

I think the text makes this too much like something you could find in any store at the mall. If it had JUST the cupcakes and clouds, I think it would look great!

I agree with soulsilhouettes it looks like something from a department store in the mall when the text is on it.

I think this is great. you should submit it.

Submit ...ITīs Brilliant!!!





Could you mind check my tee - critique?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46700/Love_in_sale

this is cute indeed! love the clouds and cupcakes.



but r u aiming for kids for this tee? i know guys would like the design but not wear it..but who cares, as long if u get printed right ;) ?



whts ur view on mine? :)