This is a comment on fashion conscious individuals. It's massively biting but i think it makes for a nice design with the placement of the design.

i meant to put that it's NOT massively biting. ah well

bump

i like the design, i think it could use some background outlines, say a lighter green than tee itself? i think the strings could be more detailed, maybe just add a white line offset to each of the strings?



please take a look at mine (specifically the first one)

EyeSocket

Bamboo & Bird

why did you put this in critique?

submit! submit!

pretty cool! i think it might look better on a red shirt..but this is fine as the way it is..plz crit mine too - http://www.threadless.com/critique/36548/A_Lion_s_Thirst

I really dig this for some reason. Reminds me of the Warhol banana for Velvet Underground--same simplicity, same audacity. Well done!



Crit: http://www.threadless.com/critique/36558/Imperial_Walker

I wasn't 100% sure it was going to be popular because of the simplicity. I'm also fairly new to threadless so that's why i put it as a critique, not sure what people are into at the moment. I'll have a look on putting it on a lighter tee.



Cheers for the positive comments though

x

this new one has white string too as a backdrop. good advice i reckon.



i've done a red one too, not sure about it myself, i prefer it on green but if you want to see it on red let me know



cheers



sean

x

i think i like the stings without the white on them....it seems too distracting or something. but i like it, it looks very retro 80's.



critique mine too, please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36610/torn

Yeah, I dunno what to do with it then. I'll wait and see what other people think. The green tee is slightly darker than i'd have liked. If there is a kelly green tee then i have a sample tee like that and it looks great.



Please critique my other design: The Gaming Revolution



Cheers,



Sean

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i think i like it better without the white lines, too, still. it draws my eyes up and there's no need for that.

i like it as is.

Wow, i like this one.

could you make the white lines on the strings a little more thin so as to reduce their distraction?

I could do that, i'll see what it looks like. I think it'll be better without the lines altogether if the tee is light enough

I think the strings would look better if they were white. You would be able to see them better against the bodies.



Cutting Remark

is it not obvious that they are puppets then? because to me, i felt like the strings didn't need to stand out.

I like this. I like how it has a hidden meaning. It's a nice design! It's. Nice shirt! I'd buy it =]





If you have a chance, check out my design and let me know what you think! =]

submit

Maybe you could try less saturated.

or take out the white color and use the t-shirt color instead?

using a less satuarated color is a good idea :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/36524/Booby_Trap

cool.. but i agree maybe the strings would look better without the white..

love to see it on red..



critique mine please.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24417/dancing_shadows

less saturated would be better, probably, or make the black a slightly off-black colour.



I think the strings bother me a bit, maybe they're a bit too thick?

And it annoys me a bit that the string on the girl's left foot isn't positioned correctly... but I guess you can't fix that without having it collide with the other strings.



I like the idea though.

I agree with the comment about the shirt color choice and having the strings without the white other than that I think its great!





Check mine out Here

Right, i've removed the white strings and i've put it on an olive tee. Better?



Please critique my other design: The Gaming Revolution

what work does it need? i think i prefer the kelly green tee, not a fan of olive

I like both of the tee's but if i had to pick i'd go with the olive. ;) Great job



Be sure to crit my design

Rorschach's Bird and vote on my Soul Jamz Design



Thanks

anybody else? i'm not gonna submit it at the moment, the kelly green tee got better feedback so i dunno what to do

It's a nice tee but not an instant-print yet. Throw some more goodness at it!

haha what a bunch of wanna-be punks

cool idea.

i like the kelly green shirt

also...

i put up a new version of arrow tessellation

one that doesnt look so much like a swastika

thanks for your comment

check out my other critiques too!

i'll have a look now, kelly green is my all time favourite colour of tee and i did a sample of this at my work and it looked fine.

I don't think you need to add much more to this as has already been suggested because it's the simplicity that sells the design.



I'm not sure it's a Threadless style design though.

i don't really know what i could add to it anyway. i think other people on strings in the background would lose the simplicity. if it's not a threadless style design then i'll just suffer the rejection if i submit

Looks miles better on kelly green

Id buy that for a dollar!

that's pretty cool man

here it is in red just in case anybody fancies something a bit different. i still prefer kelly green (v1) but a comparison is always good.



does anybody know how threadless feel about printing over the stitch lines on the collar?



cheers,



sean

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anybody?

i have no idea if they print over stitch lines, i don't think they like to do it though. and i definitely like the red and the olive green the best. :) but i think it looks great!



critique mine? please :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36862/Octopus_s_Garden#v2

they do print on the collar, but its a special printing process

i still agree with you on the kelley green

and when you get the chance could you check out my "mountain man" design



http://www.threadless.com/profile/889630/leavethewindtome/critiques

i like them both. i already have a few kelly green threadless shirts though, so thats the only thing. i like how it looks on both though.

Nice. I would wear it on red for sure.

the only reason i haven't chose red is because i did my other submission on red. people seem to like all colours. it's a conundrum

I really like it on the red more than the green, it looks more crisp and it fits the theme a little better.



Critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/36903/Untitled_1

I like the desgin and I'd wear it on red or green.

can i only submit it for print on one colour of tee? i wish i could just make my mind up

Not bad.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36822/Be_my_Valentine

the idea of the tee kinda sums up a lot about the ting tings

so beat!

better on red. I'd buy it!

I still can't decide whether to submit.



Please vote for my other tee: The Gaming Revolution

This is (hopefully) gonna be the final critique unless somebody can persuade me to change it or not submit.



What do you think?

This design is sweet. I like it a lot. I think it might be beneficial, however, to add some sort of backround. I'm not exactly sure what that is, but maybe some drop shadows or something else along those lines.

i'm not sure, i've been messing around with backgrounds today and i think it's the simplicity that works for me. i'm worried the message will be lost with too much on the tee



please critique my other tee here

I think there should be some white in the ropes, like there is around the figures. Karma

I tried the white in the ropes on an earlier version and it just didn't look right

everything looks awesome. you might just wanna consider making the strings more life like and not so perfectly straight.







i need some ideas too!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/38527/Innanimal_Stand_tall

i would try taking out the white..

adding maybe some sort of subtle halftones behind the people or puppets lol whatever they are, just to bring them out a little bit more



If you have time

Looking good! Maybe the strings could be a little less straight in some places? Love it on the green.



Please help me too

critique: Building my way out of here



Sub: Inspiration island