first rough composition of what i have in mind. A deer made of trees, bark and branches with blooming flowers all over the branches, let me know whkat ya think.

you know i actually like how the colour bleeds out and over the outlines.maybe let people view it as a shirt, so we can get an idea of where its positioned.

please comment on mine "romulus". im stuck

i will put an image of it in the tee later

thanks! they wont let me print the sleeves or collar like that, any other suggestions???

by the way i had a squiz at your other works...weekend with dad is fucking cute!

I like this a lot, maybe change they way the flowers are added into this image. The photo cut outs (i think they are if I'm wrong correct me) Arnt adding to how organic the rest of the drawing is.



The deer is great as well i love the whole concept.



I'm instead to see how this will be placed on the T-shirt. Personal suggestion would be lower right. But that's just moi!

this is only a rough skecth for the idea. evrything will then be hand drwan with lots of details

more oppinions?

i personally like the cut out flowers. adds contrast.

Personally I would like to see the entire deer. Other then that I like the style and colors!

I don't think the bird is really needed, but since it is just a rough sketch it is hard to imagine what the bird would look like in the end. Also have you considered if there is going to be any kind of background?

I like the idea! I can't wait to see your more detailed drafts. I'll be watching this one!

thanks for the suggestions

I really like this style of watercolor-ish color over linework; is that what you plan to stay with or will it be more detailed? I really like the concept and idea a LOT and agree that seeing the entire deer would be awesome. I'm definitely going to keep an eye on this one. :)

it will be very detailed, and yes, i will draw the entire deer. Thanks for the input ;)

Knowing your previous subs, i believe the way you will draw it will be great.

I do think that if you go for drawing the entire deer it might end up looking to much like topiary by valorandvellum.

maybe there is another way of approaching it.

father nature's pet? ummmm sorry no suggestions right now, Ill check it out when its further down the processs, I would say add the whole body etc but you're already doing that

it is much too similar to Topiary, so i think i0ll throw this ti the trash. Damned subconcious mind! :P

Oh, man! I had forgotten all about valorandvellum's sub. :(

:-( sorry......

I did not meen for you to through it away.

mean.

no man, thank! it was for the better. I subconsiusly copied it. I'll make a real deer jumping and from his horns a tree will form, trying to do this drawing as epic as i can jaja

I definitely don't think it should be thrown in the can; it could stand on its own... it just needs to be different from the previous sub... right? So maybe NOT drawing the whole deer; leave it kind of like it is, and use a bottom placement. The focus would be more on the head and antlers. I think you can do this and make it work fine!!!

Oops; posted too soon! LOL

Go for it.

Make it epic.

:)

I like it!!! cant wait to see the next version!! GREAT STUFF!



Please critique one of mine! :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/36409/PoptArt

or

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36501/Spoiled_Sweet_Tooth

ya pusieron otro con la idea un poco igual http://www.threadless.com/submission/195804/Deer_Forest#lastcomment hore

its sorta like this printed design http://www.threadless.com/product/1656/I_Am_Shy_But_You_Can_Reach_Me

but otherwise i like it

Help me out?

bump!

I really like this! Very cool!! you are very talented! the colors work great together.

Wow!! It looks like Bilbao´s Puppy

I like your design.

kidnaped Fish

This could work for the loves green competition, it's a lovely idea

This an amazing design. I love the coloring and how you "captured" the posture of the deer. I would suggest making the flowers a tad more "sketchy". Its great work overall.

i really like it!

Hmm too bad men,

I'd move the bird up to the antlers

ooh, i like it! have you subbed this yet?

one little thought... that branch on the neck... i'm sort thinking move the bird to the antlers and nix that little stick in the neck maybe?

Me encanta como se ve esto, creo que puede resultar en un diseño genial.



Definitivamente creo que deberias hacerlo bien "rough", con los colores que se salen de las líneas y eso, porque le dá un lindo toque y aporta a lo natural del diseño.



Saludos y suerte ;)

I LIKE THIS!

i have one more day please help me out

now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and don't forget to comment-thank you so much!

So... whats up alvarejo? Keep this up, I want to see this design printed darn it!



PS: simcha123456... could you quit spamming every single thing you see? Thanks.

love it! has an anthropologie feeling to it

this is cool





http://www.threadless.com/critique/61614/Umbrella

I think this is really cool just the way it is, it different from anything else, a final version would be great to see, in all its detail and everything, This is a fantastic idea

I like it a lot - how about lichen or moss on the antlers as well, peeling down the way that the velvet peels off their antlers in the autumn

If you have a moment to look at mine, would be much appriciated
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70780/Celtic_Nessy_knot

I like it a lot - how about lichen or moss on the antlers as well, peeling down the way that the velvet peels off their antlers in the autumn

If you have a moment to look at mine, would be much appriciated
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70780/Celtic_Nessy_knot

I like it a lot - how about lichen or moss on the antlers as well, peeling down the way that the velvet peels off their antlers in the autumn

If you have a moment to look at mine, would be much appriciated
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70780/Celtic_Nessy_knot

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I love the idea! I don't have any suggestions yet. I look forward to seeing how this design progresses.

Could you comment and vote on the design I submitted for voting? WILD mid-WEST

I love this idea. I think this would look amazing if done right. It would look really good if you went from this brushy look to a vectored realistic look. Very cool, great work.

If you have time could you critique mine? Thanks.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70672/Remember_the_fallen

this is very nice! the colors and coloring are both great!
i would like to see the placement, and also, maybe darken the line art...

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

Yeah, can you show few tee template?
the idea is fun and creative.
I need your comment,too.

I'm liking this a lot. How's the next version coming along?

Check it out!

Nice idea! would be cool to see an vector-based illustration of this one.

If you have spear time on your hand, please critique mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72000/Some_things_are_bigger_than_others

Que lindo! me lo imagino como el tipo de acuarela que se pinta sobre papel mojado :)

Stop making us bed and get this done already you bastard -.-

Wanted to say beg, but ended up putting bed, which is stupid...

i like it. please critique me. it's honey sweet honey

Who said don't submit? I think it is going to be gorgeous! Just clean up the lines, put it on a tee and play with the colors. GReAT job!
Could use some honest opinions on mine thanks!: http://www.threadless.com/critique/72230/Loading_Please_wait_for_response

need work. I think it should be more definite, half close the eyelids for a wise look and add a nightly magic ambient

think it will be great, when is it due?

go for it!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/338160/Let_s_play

I don't even know why you're putting this up for critique! You might as well just submit it, haha. All of your stuff is super awesome! GREAT WORK!

Could you check out my critique? Your advice would be appreciated

http://www.threadless.com/critique/90074/Thank_You

really interested to see where this leads, based on looking at your other sub'd designs.

I'd really appreciate any feedback you could spare,
Please checkout my design up for critique!

dang, you've got a jilllion comments on your critique! I know why....you do great work. I have nothing new to add to this crit. I think if you do it, it'll be great! (I'll have to check out Topiary, because I'm not familiar with it.)

Please critique the latest version of mine if you have the chance :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/90106/Short_Day_at_the_Beach

Love the idea. Feel like the bird and the little branch detracts from the rest. Would appreciate your opinion on mine please..
Vintage Moto

Thx!

this is an awesome idea.It will probably look even nicer when you finish it up

http://www.threadless.com/critique/90135/To_travel_is_to_live

Que te parece que empieze como un boceto tipo Davinci con un trazo y valla creciendo en detalle como mencionas como si fuera saliendo de la camiseta, como el dibujo famoso de davnci donde un brazo se dibuja al otro y viene de lo plano a lo tridimencional.