Everybody Loves PopTarts and PopArt, so i've fused the two... KAPOW! PoptARt!!!



What do you think? What Should do to spice it up?

I like it. maybe you should add more of them on there, or make them bigger. icing on the poptarts looks a bit out of place to me also. I would buy this shirt.

Added some color squares around them... what should i do with the frosting? different colors?

Added the colored halftone Squares (same as V2 just shown on t-shirt)

haha very Andy Warhol. Mm pop tarts...delicious.

I like the addition of the frames, the blurred edges just make me think of power point for some reason, how does it look with solid backgrounds? Maybe with the background squares not completely framing the toasters and poptarts.

its not supposd to be blurred... they're Halftone faded.. but the low quality jpeg blurred em out.... look at V2..... ... also, I did try it with regular frames.. it didn't look bad.. i just decided to go with halftone fade.... but ill post another version

Look at V2 to see just the Design... ill put up another version later tonight!

It's good the squares are just a little to windows esque for me.



Crit mine here

Changed the squaes to regular flat squares..... thats about it for now... any suggestions????

anything???

Try experimenting with it by trying it on different colour shirts.

Design on Navy Blue, Sand, Kelly Green, and Fuschia....

any suggestions for the design... or layout?

Tasty pop art treats!



I think I like your first version best without the squares -it just crowds the design perhaps? What would be really awesome would be if you could get little Pop Art portraits on the foremost Pop Tart in each toaster !

hmmm... ill mess around with the squares..... see what happens... as far as portraits.. hmm i guess i could try that... they'll be small and might be a distraction, but its an idea worth trying! Thanks!

bump!

I like the one without the squares best

I agree with Erica, the one without the squares. or make it cover more of the shirt.

i say version 1 looks like a submit. fun stuff

here's mine

Ok so i re-drew the toasters and made them a little cleaner and more "cartoonish".

This animation shows the design with and without boxes behind the toasters.



What do you guys like?



P.S. the original V1 was submitted to threadless a couple days ago and was denied... :(

BUMP

I see what you're doing there. :D



In true warhol fashion though I'd say go with a grid of 9 and reduce the image to its most basic elements. In this case, the pop-tart. You could have each one of the images be colored to represent a different flavor or pop-tart too.



If you get a chance I'd love some feedback. Lamb Shanks

Yea i considered a bigger grid but im trying to keep this 8 Colors... Also i tried just the pop tarts and it seemed a little weak... :/

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Love it! squares in the background are a must for me :)

I agree, the squares are a must. When you get a chance, http://www.threadless.com/submission/195987/Near_Miss

Thanks

Well heres what im submitting tomorrow Hope you guys like it!!

Any final Critiques?



(ps sorry for crumbby quality images)

I think the next slide should be a close-up of just the design rather than another placement photo.

Good idea.. ill do that before i submit!

This is improving, well done!

OK....

so here it is, the final that will be submitted later today... (with the last slide a close up of the Design) :) ENJOY!

Bump

That is pretty smart. And actually wearable

Thanks!

Submitted: Pending Approval



Pop-T-Art Submitted