This is actually a V2. Something glitched out on me when I tried to post again...



If any of you know what I'm talking about, I changed up the eye on the little guy, so he's looking at the big monster. Also, extended the wall in the background.

Nice colors and illustration, I'd say go for it!



Check out my critique if you like

This is cool, what if you gave the big dude a flashlight to shine on the little dude?

CHINGEL's idea about the flashlight is good but I'm not sure if it needs anything at all.

Made a few changes. Cleaned up some line-work, added colors, and halftone shading. Thoughts?

nice! i really like the artwork. i like the smaller monster but the bigger one's arms and legs kinda bug me

interesting. u got some potential here, maybe add more fear into the expression of the monster?

i like it, shading is done really well and cute concept good color



if you want crit mine ?

only if you have the time

I agree with ChrisDB, it's really cool, but the big monsters little nubby arms are a little odd. Maybe you could put some reference as to what is lighting the little monster up and casting the shadow. A camp fire or a lantern or something.



If you get a chance I'd love some feedback. Lamb Shanks

nice style! I like it!

Nice style Nice colors, go for it !

The bigger monster looks more surprised than afraid. If that's your intention then it's amazing!

Really cute concept.

Best of luck!

SUBMIT THIS! brilliant work. and a very unique and amazing style

maybe change the title on this one as well.

thank atoolbox23. just saw your design up for scoring and it's awesome.



anyone have ideas for titles on this one?

This one is great, really like the colours and shading as well.



If you want can you give me some advice

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36665/Samsara

Hahaha, I like this one, especially the line style. But, somehow the shadow of the green monster is cut, a lil bit unreal. Perhaps you can fix that. I do like the color and the line style the most, you gave me inspiration for my design.

I see what you're saying about the shadow; I'll see if I can address that.

addressed that shadow issue and changed facial expression on the big guy—more scared now, I think. Better?

Really cute for a kid or adult shirt, nice job on fixing the shadow worked great. I'd submit/



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Thanks

haha it's awesome!! so cute :)

thanks guys. last chance for feedback before I submit...

yeah, it's definitely a winner for a kids tee

SUBMITTED!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/197002/Monster_Shadows

cool i like it