I think this is pretty cool.

thanks edword. i hope to get some more feedback from people because my subs score pretty low and i'm curious to learn what turns people off from them.

great details
i dunno needs something a tiny bit more

i think you are right. it is lacking something...

i hate leaving a comment as vague as that
but im sure youll think of something
:D

I like the colors and I like style. I

I just love it so much there ias nothing i can think that could improve it. 5$

Maybe you can add a little background, peple like that, I sugest smething a bit vague and abstract

I like this. Nice work. I dont like your little drawn shirt, actually I hate it. But I like the design, I think its disturbing why dont you put it on a real shirt. sorry but I had to tell you that.

yikes! hate it? well, fair enough. everyone has an opinion RG. i appreciate honesty. i'll look into the "real person" thing.

okay. here is a newer version with some background action. how does that work?

oh, and i added a studly model for RG.

I love the line work and the colors and that background thing you added...much better on a real model! The other one was just so bold and was distracting from the real focus.
Nice Job!

Love the model and the close ups!

Very cool! My only thought is that the deer, bear face and bear hands are detailed and then his body goes flat. The rest is stellar! Nice work stumpy!!

even sweeter.

i see what you mean little g. i will now have to destroy this and start from scratch! okay, not really but i will think about that now.

coooool

I like his shoes

and that is what im talking about
well done :)

i think this is the final version. i added some line work to try to eliminate some of that flatness. so there you have it G!

I really like a lot of your work, but you've GOT to permanently lose that t-shirt template you always use.

This piece is really nice.

i did! look up above.

oh, and thanks!

this is the best....I'm not so sure about the background...I'd like to see a background but this one just doesn't do it for me.


I know...after you thought you were allll done!


I say go ahead and submit it though

I think this is nice. Submit it. I really like the bears shoes.

yeah the background is stylistically different from the animals and that contrast draws too much attention. Otherwise, Good Work!

I like most of it but teh interior line work seems a little last minute .. maybe if you made them so they showed like man boobs and a gut instead of just mimicing the outline ... right now they arent doing anything they should add some idea of form

i personally like teh bacground but if you want to go with what other people are saying one way you could fix it easily enough is add angles to teh branches not so straight across

title inspired by bonjovi, "you give love a bad name" because , ya know SHOT THROUGH THE HEART AND YOU'RE TO BLAME

sub it!

i see what you are saying wullagaru but i already subbed it! it's something for me to consider in the future with my stuff though.

hey learning at any time is a big thing .. I try to learn something new with each attempt .. doesnt always work but I try

man thats a nice shirt, thanks for getting rid of that little shirt. Your scores will go up!

oddly enough it reminds me of princess mononoke and I have no idea why

he didn't just kill the cat! RESUB it man thats an awesome drawing that has to get printed. I've said it all.

Kokochiyoi on Feb 11 '07
oddly enough it reminds me of princess mononoke and I have no idea why

The deer is oddly reminiscent of that white dog/wolf thing.

Awesome! I like the background, I just think you should have lighten it up a bit. You might very well have a print here, Sr.

thanks everyone! i was hesitant about the critques but this was definitely helpful in fine tuning this latest sub.

Quite like the simple sketching of the feet, works well with the more intricate and highly detailed sections such as the bears head etc