Preparation for Halloween? haha! No. Freehand drawing and adjust it in computer.

Well done illo. Freaky design.

Two comments. The lips need to have a softer edge. The teeth line is too crisp for the rest of the work.

I'd like to see if you could add a concept to this. Right now it's just a freaky face.

This is really cool.

I think the lips and teeth still need some work though.

It would be especially neat if this glows in the dark as well!

:)

i agree with Francesa, the line for the teeth are too crisp for the rest of the design, that's the first thing that stood out to me as needing work.

Great design. However, you need to make the mouth larger, smiley-er, and add smile facial lines to make it look realistic. Also, the teeth should probably be individually defined.

It might take some work, but this could be a genuinely effective design.

^ thanks for the comment. I will make a revision this week..

I'm not sure what to think of this, but I agree that the teeth need to be more individually defined. Also, I'm not sure I'm digging the color. Maybe play with some different face color options.



Could you comment on an idea I'm working on?



Slippery When Wet

if it glowed it would be super groovy!!

i made some revisions on the teeth, lips and the its darkness.. what do u think guys?

yeah! nice work on the teeth definitely an improvement

the cracked skin is pretty cool too

i just uploaded a new drawing, dont really know what to do with it though

the name is Media Man

^thanks

The improvements were nicely executed. I'm not sure of anything else you could do to make it better. I say go ahead and submit.



Please comment on some ideas I'm working on. There's a new sketch of Slippery When Wet:



For the Cannibal Watching His Weight

Slippery When Wet

^thanks

Not really my thing but I can see this shirt doing well.

I want to submit this.. but just want to know your opinion guys..

you shouldnt sub this as is. just having that face is kind of, pointless. not being rude, just saying from a voters stand point, i would wanna see more.

so any suggestions?

i'm thinking if i will add some hands at the bottom... any suggestions guys?

I like it as is, don't think hands are going to look right. Tough to say what to add if anything. Really like the eye.

so is this ready for submission?

do i have make it bigger in shirt or the size is ok?

can you try braces? just want to know..if this is monochrome i guess it would come nice on foil..

Black & White, test and show.

the size is ok..if you want the attention..because you want him to look at you..:)

hey see my design if you have time thanks! Link Targets

http://www.threadless.com/submission/196087/quot_Business_No_Evil_Just_Monkey_quot?streetteam=zerobriant

^thanks

You'd definitely get noticed wearing it. One thing I'd probably change tho is that it kind of looks like it's getting cut off on some of the very edges like where instead of fading out all the way it just kinda stops. I would fix that if it were mine.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/36964/iAmRobo

I think the face is great. If you wanted to try something, you might want to take the shading of his skin and macro it, continue it to cover the entire front from neck to bottom, but not the arms. I think that might be amazing. It might be way to much work though. It definitely has a lot of impact as is, and to be honest, this t-shirt buying crowd is so unpredictable, I just dunno.



If you get the chance...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36897/Renee#v2

newer version ... i just played with some ideas...

Have you tried a green shirt?

green shirt? you think it would work?

any ideas guys?

its a cool idea but it doesnt really fit with the airbrush style of the face



i added some stuff to Mountain Man let me know what you think

Mountain Man

^so do i have to stick with the previous version?

id keep trying new ideas if you have anymore

thanks for the site, i didnt want to waste my time searching on google and end up with a crappy site that didnt know what they were talking about.

no prblem... please comment on my submission and score it..



Warrior's Last Arrow

dont worry you got a 5 a long time ago dude

although i do agree with some of the comments

i like the design a lot i just dont think it was finished yet

good luck though

^ thanks