This is a pretty rough version of the design. I'm gonna do the body of the monster, and maybe work on the text a bit.



Comments, concerns, insults?

Yeah...

why do i find this frighteningly funny?

kids don't like this,.. for sure..



the 3 faces look the same.. hehe





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I'll change the kids faces.

its cool.. haha so funny need be longer so and we see on shirts first more of his body mayeb with worn out effect at button to fade it

and shouldn't it say childrens?

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I'd like to see placement, cool design...

he needs a body

Yeah I'm gonnna draw a body soon.

i think it needs a body and some kind of background something like candyland well thats the way i pictured in my mind

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great monster by the way

here is mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36431/little_king

I like the idea but I wont wear it as Im afraid itll give children nightmares. All the same, I think you should sub it for the subversiveness!

hahahahahaha this is the funniest/scariest thing ever.

haha i think its funny and cute. id wear it

I like it. I don't think you should change the kids faces. Since they are both the same it adds to the creepiness.Cutting Remark

Lobster

Made a body, and textures.



For a title I was thinking, Their Journey to Candyland Ended Abruptly.

There was a model of Brianne pointing to her shirt and giving the thumbs up but it got messed up. :(

really like the monster, maybe the kids could use a little more detail

Okay I'll try that.





Oh and I re-did the text, this version or last version in better?

this version

very cool,

the little boys overalls could use buttons.

and maybe add the shine to the childrens' eyes



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it's really cool! :)

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I love it! V2 is great!

v2 is a winner for sure. $5



http://www.threadless.com/critique/35964/Psychosomatic_Session

:D too funny, but shouldn't the kids look scared? I mean, aren't they about to be eaten? maybe they should be screaming.



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I like the happy children. Yes, same twinkle for their eyes too. Monster is great. Think the type looks too much like Comic Sans and prefer a cut paper looking version—Refinement of last round's type instead? Good luck!



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Subbed! Thanks for the help everyone.

yeah, its well good. and creepy. like the orphanage



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childrens are dilicous is right i think?

this is way beet with his body i think ur ready

add some shadows to it stabilize the design and adds solid feelings

crite

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looking good! keep up the great style!

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looks great! love it :)

This is awesome.

Nice.



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LOL I love this!

Just wanted to say thanks for your comments on my critique for Watch Where You Sit, and let you know that it's finally up for running if you'd like to score and comment on it.



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What an adorable shirt. I totally want to buy this for my niece. Wait, I don't have one but if I did I'd totally buy it.

Creepy as hell! The good creepy.

I don't think kids would say that they're delicius, but this is funny.

I think the children eyes are strange, maybe make them like the mosnter's eyes, anyway, great design.

Cheers

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this is awesome.



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