I am starting to play around with this idea. I have another version that I will post soon that has an aged/ worn look to it. I like it better that way but I was wondering what all of you think. Thanks.

This is very funny. You're off to a great start. I don't have any suggestions for you, but I would like to see what you do with it next.

This is looking really good for a V1 critique! I especially like the footprints! Curious to see how the aged/worn version looks.

Here is the second version with the worn filter applied. It's on heather gray. Let me know what you think, thanks everyone!

i'd like to see some shrubbery in the background. I think it would just improve the whole look

I love this.

funny concept. wonder how this would look on an olive shirt to imply more natural surroundings—not sure that gray is best... think i preferred this without the distress texture. also, line weight might be too thin?



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I don't mind it on gray, but I wouldn't mind seeing other color options as well.

i agree with making it a green tee then adding black lines for bush shapes

I agree with Chengui, i wold like to see other color options. I like V1 better.



Wanna check mine out?

v1 definitly

*black outlines for the bush shapes

Pretty awesome illustration and concept. I'd $5 it for sure. I think I like v1 a bit better.



check my critique if you like

u have a lovely work both fine with me worn out effect or not!

lets see on shirts plz?

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am watching ur designs from now on ur work is awesome! and full of UR style and atmospher

Looks good, but what about placement?



If possible can you critique http://www.threadless.com/critique/36060/Gangsta

Thanks everyone, I think I'm going to try to darken the lines and try the shrubbery idea in the background, I'll post a new one soon. Thank you!

i think this design will go lovely with more color options than heather gray. it's such a creative idea!

awesome, love the details!



maybe just suggested greenery, don't let them over power the characters.

I agree about putting in some background. I prefer it without the distress. Great design!

i think looks great adding some background dont going to hurt em

whit that and some color options this is going to be ready to sub

please when you have time can you check mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/36431/little_king

Added brush in background and minimized worn texture, also darkened line quality so it pops a bit more. Let me know what you think! Thanks.

Love the addition of the background! I think you're getting close to submission.

I like it a lot the color scheme is very nice





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Sub this!

i prefer the non-distressed look in v1.



also, don't forget to show how it looks on the shirt!

ah, yes cool background, good color too



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Amazing I'd submit



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Rorschach's Bird

Ready to submit!

Looks great!

Def. Good like you get a 5 from me.



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Thanks

Ha! It is great to see you line quality on some of these shirts! Keep drawing.

Forgot to post this in here!!!



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