Robots are on the takeover. what do you like and not like? any changes?

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the texture approach is intresting... I don't know about the windows... maybe it is too much. I would remove them or try something different.

Also you could add a mouth to the robot to make it mor expresive... for example like in doubt about the human expertise.



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Pink Punk Frank

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i had the exact thought in my head while making this shirt

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34603/two_more_years

Thanks. He has a mouth but its not finished and I'm taking your ideas into consideration. Don't like the windows? And you like the texture?

Ok no more links guys. That's not cool

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Yhea... I like the texture work... it makes it differetn, but I think the windows have 2 problems... first they distract the attention form the main scene there, and second they don't even look real because they are a little transparent.

gotchya. i tired to make them transparent so its not so bold

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Pink Punk Frank

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GOOD SHIT



bump!

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took away window, added some decor

made it a tad bigger

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There are transparency problems. One can see the chair through the arm of the robot.

thats all you have to say? just a minor touch up

crtiquey

ADDED PICTURE FRAME

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haha! I like the headline in the picture frame lol its really progressed since I last saw it, nice textures btw

Thanks a lot! I need to as more without over doing it

Yea, this has improved a lot. The textures and wood grains work well together. I don't really know why he's scratching his head though, it seems like he should be nervous. Maybe have him tugging at his collar trying to get some air, as nervous people do sometimes. looking good!

i'm liking the collar tug. totally!

I agree about finding another pose for the guy, the head scratching isn't doing it.

ok willd do!!

Is this doable on a t-shirt?

should be. possibly sim. process

added some more fun stuff.

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This is getting very good. I have a problem with your robot in all the versions. The big triangle (actually trapezoid) says "lampshade" to me every time I see it. It looks like something the robot is behind, especially the way his eyes peer over it.

It does look like a lamp shape, oh no!

that lamp shade is his jaw!!! lol...

I don't get it . . .

maybe cuz your 16.

idk its okay just needs a little work