What do you guys think of Joe?

Thanks for the comments and advice.

hahahaha, I love it!, the expression is perfect!

hahaha, thats good man. i think you should make the test just a touch darker and give the paper a drop shadow so i kind of looks tacked on your chest. but frickin great!

i think the idea is great. would it be better if the poster just originally had 'we love bacon' instead of having it crossed off? i dunno whether it would, i do really like it as it is though

Well, I think it lacks some brighter colors, or a wider variety of colors for that matter. Maybe change the shirt color to something else? There are plenty of colors that would go well with this, just experiment with it. Good luck :)

I think it would look better if it just said "Dead or Bacon" or Dead oor Alive crossed out with Bacon

I think he should look a little meaner. Like give him a scar on his cheek.

Joe with eyebrows awesome. hahah

very funny! i think you should detail the pig a little more because he looks a little to cute to be wanted lol

oh, maybe some stubble.





This is what I'm working on.

Maybe cross out the "or alive" with a horizontal line.

Nice man. I liek it.

Pork Chop Sandwhiches!

The expression! The text! The colors! It's perfect. XD

It'd be nifty to have the hog running off or looking suspicious on the back of the tee.



Critique mine too?

how about "WANTED: FOR SQUEALING"

So I added a couple of elements to try to make Joe look a bit more mean. What do you guys think?

lol...i like it. i like the letters, but the red one should be more rough perhaps...i like the colours... and the hog could have more work, a little bit more rounded (srry for my english)



anyway you have to know this is "Cool, but it needs work" ;)

pretty funny concept.. i'm not sure it needs "joe the hog"... since it does look like a pig.. i think it could really work if it looked like a real flyer... and if the type were hand drawn...

This is really cute.

I love "Joe's" expression; its almost as if hes laughing.

I dont think there is much you can really add,

or take away. So I say you go ahead and submit this.

:)

i usually don't like to post my critique sub in my comment, but our designs are somewhat related! lol. maybe i should name my piggie, lol! Pork Chop

i think is realy funny and i agree whit the roughness of the red letters chek out mine please



http://www.threadless.com/critique/36431/little_king

I like it, its a clever idea! However, this is just personal preference, i'm not really diggin the 'joe the hog' and the text for 'we love bacon' Mabye the red one can be really hand written? haha

I agree with the handwritten text for "we love bacon"

otherwise really neat...

i love his eyebrows.

very neat :)



critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36448/Peas_on_Earth



~Leigh

I agree with the really handwritten bit, and give your nails a little more attention :D

Haha this is awesome. I know this is a little repetitive, but yeah, I agree with the handwritten suggestion. His face is hilarious. What are you thinking about in terms of position?

Thanks everyone for the suggestions. I was thinking that i would be fun to have the design on the back? What do think?

"The Hog" should be in quotes, like a middle nick name (e.g. Joe "The Hog" Vargas or Joe "The Hog" Halberd).



This is really a lot of fun! I'll be voting high on this one when you submit it. Please comment on some ideas I'm working on:



For the Cannibal Watching His Weight

Slippery When Wet

What do you guys think of it? Do you think the design should be on the back or the front?

well if its on the back you definitely need something for the front of the tee, i really like the concept, its really funny!



take a look at mine!

Do it! Do it! Do it!

interesting concept, it's a bit clunky in this execution... think about it a bit more!

Do you think it would work better having the design in the front?

i love it!! pigs in moustaches...clever.

the design should go on the front...i think it would make less sense on the back....unless you had the pig himself (not a poster) skulking around the front...hrrrm.



crit mine please (sorry, the link is funky)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36610/torn

What about now? What do you guys think?

Do you guys like the front and the back like this?

i really like it! i wonder though if the back didn't have the paper behind the line work, but it was done more like the front, maybe they would work better together.



hey could you look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/37273/grizzly

I really like the idea but what about swapping the designs? it seems to me that if you put the outline drawing on the back it could work better

I really like it too! I think the added pig was a good idea but also think the designs should be swapped.

Oh and maybe you should still change the font for the "we love bacon" part, just my personal preference..

Keep up the good work!