The design itself, looks narrower on the template than it does on the shirt. So, don't worry about the empty space on the sides.

Detail:

fat man

noodle makers

shirt model

great work!!! how u do it its free hand?
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I draw everything out and then scan it in.

it really is good work...
i thought it would be too busy for a tshirt,
but i saw it on the model and it looks great...
critique mine? it's called still life

le sigh...

good job, malcolm.

couple of suggestion... i don't know if you can or not, but maybe change the green smoke/fume thing to white so it looks more like heat. the green makes it look like he's stinky :) unless that's what you're going for. and maybe add some light watercolor shadows underneath the characters -- just to ground them a bit.

good work :)

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Thanks Phil.

I'll work on that steam. Originally I wanted it to be white, but I couldn't quite get it there with the blending of layers the way they are. I may just eliminate it all together.

Shadows would be good as well.

Mornin' bump

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