I thought it was pretty funny...this is for all you senior members!



*this is a joke critique, please don't get angry. I just thought it was funny.

* i am not going to submit this

panda needs a mouth then it will be perfect to submit

lowls

i'd like to see some water color effects coming out of the tree

i was just thinking that!

better or worse?

better or worse?

maybe some skulls?

Crows. Needs crows.

omg bio bot i was just thinking that!!!!



omg me and you are like eye to eye



shake and bake!*



*im the baker

*shakes*

lol, needs more. what should i add?!?

should the fisherman's head be a skull?

the fisherman's head should be a tape cassette

also, some some fireworks.

the bait is going to be a tape cassette and the fishermans head is going to be a skull!



makes sense!

you're a modern day rembrandt

eh, what other epic thing is needed?

oh btw, all the clip art i used was royalty free, free clip art

skull, cassette, fireworks, and tree all are clips

lose the fireworks, make the tree black again and i think if you're going for weird, it'll be spot on



(I really liked your original by the way! i think the original version with a large open panda mouth could be better than this one)

have you considered making the panda a giant fish?

bio-bot you cant make it into a fish! thats plagiarism, this is creativity.



greententacle: this is kind of a joke critique, the design up there has ever single thing that people dont like in a shirt all in one...

I'd lose the fire works, they make it kind of busy, but everything else is awesome!

ya, bio-bot you lose. im taking out the fireworks

The clueless-ness of some is awesome.

Perhaps, you could make the back portion of the panda turn into the silhouette of a flock of birds flying away. That would be awesome.

i def will!!!!!!!!





any more awesome ideas?

what else is needed?

?

like the name?

What other things?

?

...

make it bigger

yepp

yep

Haha

Going from Version 7, because all I get is a 100% screen with Version 8 with no image. I am liking the progress being made here. The Person looks cartoony compared to the rest and the Tree looks out of focus to me. I like the bear and the cassette tape also! Good stuff!

FYI: I made my last comment about the person BEFORE you loaded numer 9. I am not really digging the birds. The siloette of the one on the tree looks realistic where as the others look like clip art. :)

lol @ this.... I totally get it to and I'm not a senior member!

k ill get rid of those birds

oh, and add a squid or octopus....

yeppppp

no squid?

where would i put it?



plus i dont see many squid shirts...

yepp

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i thought it was a joke crit? awesome panda tho

ya, i liked it. a lot, so i decided i would sub it

cool as hell.



critique me?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36472/Global_Warming#v2