pretty far along, what do you think?

It's too busy. Have fewer shapes.

place it on a shirt.. it looks good so far

i agree that it is a little busy, but i love the concept. maybe change some colors on the shapes too. you have 8 slots, make the best of them, and i would love to see this on a shirt.



what do you think about mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35582/The_Lonely_Building

The shapes are a bit overwhelming right now...maybe darken some to show depth?





Score my design?