This is a complete redesign of an idea which didn't get enough love. This time it's two sides (front and back, not in and out).

The big mouse is NOT on the shirt. He's only there so large because he's showing off.

It good on any color tee except pink because that matches the mice's ears too closely and looks weird. Let me know if you have favorite colors.

You got some big issues with your artwork. the mouse on the far right looks like his leg is twisted behind him. the rope around the cat's tail isnt actually on his tail its just kinda floating there. The cat looks like he just broke his right arm and the veiny light yellow underside isnt working I would suggest a more round one like the mice have. It looks really funky how the mousetrap ends at the running mouse. Also i hope you realize the mouse on the far right will be right next to the pie but that shouldnt be a problem.

As far as the concept i think its pretty funny. Good start and good luck!

crit me?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34752/Trumpet_Energy

I string looks unnatural around the tail of the cat. The hamster holding the string looks unbalanced.

See? It looks good on any color! (Except pink and black.)

For a detail check out V1.

Oooops. I just saw the mouse on the right has no tail. My bad. I have to attend a meeting (yawn.) but the tail will be added next version.

Mouse on the right has a tail now.

really like the idea, maybe you could make the mouses more joyful(if that makes sense)



the cat is a little too skinny.



great idea, but needs some work.



Can you please rate my shirt?



http://www.threadless.com/submission/193430/Guitar_BIG

My neighbors tabby looks just like that! And he's always stealing food =)

Btw, the purple looks really good

the cat just looks wrong, sorry man...

The cat is more like a kitten now and the mice have more cartoonish faces.

i think out of all those color options, it looks best on the tan-ish color and white... the only two things i would even change is the orange color. it seems so pale to me... and maybe kitty needs a little bit more to get ambushed with. what if it was a water balloon since cats hate water?

i think out of all those color options, it looks best on the tan-ish color and white... the only two things i would even change is the orange color. it seems so pale to me... and maybe kitty needs a little bit more to get ambushed with. what if it was a water balloon since cats hate water?

Thanks for the suggestions. I was going to rework this, but the idea seems to be in use by someone else now.

I like it alot but i think the cat needs to be a different colour from the mice. It's currently a bit difficult to see what's happening - i keep seeing a tiger and wondering what it's doing there....



I love the idea tho!

i just saw which one you were talking about. I'd still work on it just for the experience...

i really like this design! you should write to threadless and tell them about the person who's copied your design. "el plan" is not as good as yours and an obvious copy....

and yours has been up way longer.keep at it. i want to buy this tee for my girlfriend