I'll be positioning the toad to the left somewhere in front so it looks like he's properly looking up at the skeleton.

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Cool drawing, can you add colors?

Yes, I forgot to mention that this is a work in progress, I'm coloring in the skeleton right now.

skeleton vectorized, still working on the background and foreground elements. THis will most likely be on black or dark green, so the skeleton will bop considerably more.

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Can you make the lining and shadowing a little darker? It kind of blends with the main color as it is. Otherwise, I like it so far.

color version 1

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You're going for Yogi here, right? or what? why are there mushroom people? it's really well executed, but i don't understand it completely.



Could ya help me please?

Yogi? No.



I may add a saddle to define it a little more clearly.

centered the skeleton a bit better.

realized I had missed one of the velvet rope bars, so i added it.

evened out the ropes in behind the skeleton.

ahahahaa, yogi... that's funny. It's definitely recognizable as Yoshi btw... I read in v1 about the toad in the front looking up at the skeleton, that would be cool. All you'd have to do is just tilt the head a little (kinda looks like hes looking straight ahead right now. I'm not too sure about the info card, what about a sign like this. Fun design and it looks great on green! hehe yogi

I did have that placard in mind instead of the sandwich board. I'll put that together.



An thanks for the tip on Toad's head!

replaced the placard and altered the front onlooker.

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This is a great idea but I think the toadies could be drawn better

agreed. away I go!

numerous changes

so much better! I'd say it's ready to go.

flash test

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I like it! Sub!

awesome. very nice progression from the original sketch.



Critique mine please.



My Heart's In The Sky

Closer detail, more for the "game" portion

Any name suggestions?

holy crap dude, i think you might have gone overboard with the game!



also, I think a dark blue shirt option might be cool.



no names come to mind right now. maybe something with "mushroom kingdom"?

Do you mean overboard as a bad thing? Or just that is wasn't necessary?

unnecessary.

haha the game is awesome,

I wish I knew flash better so I could actually have obstacles to jump over and coins to collect, but I'm nowhere near that good.

have you considered copyright violations yet?



fun idea though.



Happy McMousey Pants

Chimney Drinkey

The picture on the sign looks distorted, i'd say other than it's ready to submit.



check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35065/Escape

Keep the game! haha

like it best on the red.

yeah man this rocks. aside from the fact that yoshi might have legal issues around him, I'd say send it in!

changed ot the second t-shirt color option and tweaked the video game walk cycle (barely solved that issue)

Very cute.

The angle of the shadows on the posts and the dino don't match. And the light source on the info sign is from the left side.

Except for those minor things, sub it.