sketch phase.



This will be on a black shirt with only the white and the colors showing through the black background.



my character busts haven't scored really well, but I couldn't resist this guy.

haha I really like the nose ring and 'national pornographic' tshirt, nice start, he could do with a spikey neck collar or maybe his jacket could have some spikes, just to make him a bit punkier

Thank you, I did entirely forget spikes on his jacket. I was planning a tattoo on his neck, but I think it would just be visually confusing.

sweet looking good so far, check out mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35067/WIP_penny_for_your_thoughts

For now, I know one button is going to say "Stripe Edge". The other button currently has a hoof stamping with a cartoon burst coming out from under it.



Not so hot on the second button.



Another idea was the exploited mohawk skull profile replaced with a zebra skull, or a zebra skull with human eyes in the sockets like the misfits logo, both are too hard to pull off on a tiny button and National Pornographic won the tshirt's spot.

I'm also going to add 4H on his jacket, made to look like it was applied with whiteout...



I miss being a teenager...

Looks great so far!

added spikes, leopard print, 4H logo

I like the improvements!

2 color options

bump

bump

best model ever

I got really lucky to find a guy whose guitar matches the shirt design :D



Do Dragonforce!

I meant:



"GO Dragonforce!"

YAY!

Yay?

love it!

Do you think the textured background print is a viable option? Or should I stick to the primary image?

i like itt,, hahaha cool one mayeb use foils yah,,

crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34641/king_cock#v3

haha....national pornographic :P



i think the primary image is better.

Bumping again. I'd love more critiques pleasey pleasey!

flash test with punk music by my old (old old old old) band "The Action Figures" from my teen years.

HAHAHA! Stripe Edge! Good one!

Great stuff man.

I like it. My only suggestion would be to make the mohawk a little taller (and I'm not sure about that top ear-ring... is it a gauge?)

Stripe Edge Zebras in the Pit Together!



Singing Herbivore Anthems Together!

Thanks Mezo and Ninth Wheel!

i agere with coyote loco about the top earring. also, the dark grey jacket kinda gets obscured among the black shirt. maybe make it a tad lighter?

And Bio Bt and Coyote.



Yes, the top ear is a guage, maybe I'll tweak that to make it more obvious

I'll play with the jacket's tone, I just don't want it to stand out so much that it no longer looks like a black leather jacket.

actually, i like how the jacket looks in v4 and v3. in this version it just looks darker. also, i'd stick with the traditional placement.

maybe switch the earrings, since people tend to get them in their lobes anyway.

taller mohawk, lighter jacket, more obvious gauge ring in ear.



Silver ink and plastisols



and punk provided by a teenaged me.

awsome!

I think I like the name "zebrawk" better than "nature's punk rocker" which do you prefer, or do you have any other ideas?

Thanks D!

It'd be cool if you could make the mohawk like liberty spikes?

Zebrawk ftw

I don't mind the idea of liberty spikes, but I think at this angle, the shape and idea of them would be lost.

bump for name suggestions, zebrawk is in the lead right now.

AWESOME!

lol niceeeeeeee he needs color in his mohawk. like bright pink

I like Zebrawk better out of those 2.



other suggestions:

"The Herd Didn't Want Him"

"Too Cool For the Serengeti"

"Crucial Resistance"

"Equine Rebellion"

Botswana Calling

Angry Somalian

God Save Equine

I like god save equine.

A couple of lions dressed like hair rockers or straight-laced businessmen in one color in the background would be awesome