Fading Cities Burn

Any good or is it a bit plain?

It's a bit plain, but that's not a big deal.

I like it.

Thanks ^_^

Definately go with more detail, make it lower on the shirt. maybe add a sun or something, make it look hot? i don't know, it's too plain to be sub'd.



Could ya help me please?

Yeah this is just a loose freehand selection with a black red gradiant fill and some randomesque rectangle shapes being cut out. This definetely needs more fleshing out.



What are you trying to say or show with this print?

your fire looks more like a alien glow too.

I've added a UFO to make it look more like an alien glow.

*bump*

I wonder how it would look with light glowing through windows on some of the buidings. Would have to be careful it doesn't get too busy. I like the UFO!

I tried it with light glowing through windows on the buildings but it made it look too cluttered.

Thanks for liking the UFO :)

I dont like the shape of the buldings it looks like you didnt spend a whole lot of time on them. I would suggest adding billboards, telephone poles, antennas, water tower?, etc. something to make it look more intresting.

crit me?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34752/Trumpet_Energy#lastcomment

it's really lacking concept....and that's ok in most cases where the illustration can back it up...but here it doesn't. sorry homie.



Happy McMousey Pants

Chimney Drinkey

Why would the whole UFO be lit up? Wouldn't just the underside, maybe the windows too, be lit up?

I like the idea. Maybe fine tune the stuff coming out of the ship to more of a 'laser beam' instead of all blobby.

I like the simplicity of it.



Critique mine please.

I think it's ready to submit.

My Heart's In The Sky

I like this design. It's simple and good.

It really hasn't got enough to be printed yet, try drawing it from a different angle and adding details to the buildings