I'm still going to add more of the lighter highlight color in different areas, but I was wondering what you think?

yes, i'm watching

don't know who the moron is who said don't submit this. 50 lashes for the sod

it reminds me of kennnnnn's work

i do like it

come now lena. kennn doesn't own little nude guys.

any ideas/things I should change/add?

haha it reminds me of kennn

which is a good thing

i wasnt like OMG STOLEN!





and anyway, i own little nude guys so nyeh

you must've lied about your age on the nude guy application form.



i don't have any suggestions sorry slate. it looks good.

excellent colour choice

yeah, nice colours

it reminds of that that dude from oddica but i likey

Everyone else likes the colours, but I think they're a bit too monochromatic. Maybe just add another colour choice and I'll be good. Love the design.

sub

some more color would put this over the top. stellar idea though slate.

i must be the only one that wants the lil ppl to be at least a slightly different color. otherwise, i say sub it.

I love this. I agree with chelly though. Another subtle color would make this awesome design even better! Great job though :)

I love it the way it is

Perfect. Sub it!

thanks everyone! Yeah, as of now i've only got 2 colors, so expect an update with some more colorey goodness!

awesome!! i love the style. i think i'm kind of torn about the green border around everything, though. i'm guessing you did that to define them from the background more, but it seems to really flatten the image, whereas it's obvious there's suggested depth. perhaps they could be grounded to something a bit more? perhaps add some subtle black shadows under everything?



it's so cool!!

whoah...sonmi is good.

I would have said sub the fuck out of this thing, but after reading her ideas, I'd love to see it without the lines now, and the shadows!!! OOOOooooh, that could really make this thing badass.

Very cool!



I agree with Sonmi about the outline, and I'd love to see more colors here.

yeah, sonmi, I wanted to use the shirt color for the linework, however some shapes get lost, like the lead in the pencil would be non-existant if I got rid of the outline. Any suggestions on fixing that? I will definitely add some shadows! thanks again!

yeah i noticed that some of those would get lost in the background; in which case i think those particular outlines could stay! but perhaps there's even another solution; perhaps changing the color of the outline to some sort of neutral orangish brown?

i sure do like my semi-colons.

so, get rid of that blue outline altogether, and make the ink lines the orangish brown instead of the shirt color?

oh, no! i meant that you can either get rid of the blue outlines around the outside of the figures, except for the areas where it's necessary, like the tip of the pencil (and keeping the ink lines the shirt color)



or you can just change the outline color from blue to orangish-brown, while still keeping the line work the shirt color.



sorry, i'm just a mess with words!!

i guess that color is more a mint green than a blue though, isn't it!

I took a lot of your suggestions, added more colors, and tada! Anything else you can add?

huge improvement IMO, but i like bold colours. there may be people who prefered it understated.

Love the bold colors ! I already voted to submit it... so I can't really change my vote.

better!

Looks great!

so, more work still?

I like it, I think the placement on the shirt will make or break it though. It's obviously a dead center shirt design, and I know you know that, unless I'm overstepping my bounds and you wanted this upside down on the back...?

it's very cool but I agree with papaprime only 1/2 way. I think the placement will make or break it for me. But I really hate dead center placement that ends up sitting above my chest.

yeah, placement is going to be a trick. I think I failed with my tribeca sub on size, so I'll take time placing this correctly.

Alright, what do you think now? placement, etc. etc.?

I think I like v2 the best. I wouldn't mind seeing the design smaller and centered on the shirt. Nice work as usual anyway!

sub it!

anyone else agree with a different placement?

Bigger!



and center!

4th and final version!

looks great!

the paperclip is sloppy with too many colors in such a small space, but otherwise this looks wonderful

Sweet!

sub it's great