I've been experimenting with typography and I think it came out neat, but I'd like to know what you all think. I'm not certain of the color choices and white tees don't seem to sell well, so I'm up for suggestions on tee color.



Lots of different color combinations and close ups on the detail here: http://www.freewebs.com/distortionn/pandacakes.html



Please let me know which combo you like most and feel free to go crazy with suggestions.

Interesting. I like the style but it might be hard to stand out from the other 2 million panda designs. Good work though.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/3497/Bold_Attempt

Ugh. Don't hit "Needs work" and not tell me how to improve.

awesome, maybe try putting on some color options

I like it just the way it is.

The patches don't fee dark enough, like the type needs to be either heavier or some of it smaller and tighter as far as spacing. I like the concept.

I THINK THERE IS NOT MUCH TO DO, MAYBE A FULL BODY, BUT... NO, JUST SUBMIT IT, OR FORGET ABOUT IT, I KNOW IS NOT HELPFULL WHAT I SAY BUT I CANT SAY MORE...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/3292/Till_I_do_us_part

I think this would work better if the words weren't cut off to create the design. Every "panda" should be whole.



Ooh, add some bamboo in a similar style, but make it green?

great idea, i mean, the bamboo thing...

The bamboo is a great idea. I will try that out and resub the new version asap.



Does anyone think it would be better (funnier) if the words spelled out the names of other animals instead of just 'panda'?

i think it would be cool if you did maybe a different animal, because i bet people wouldn't like another panda shirt. but i like it!

sub it

I agree with fouchnickens on the "panda"'s, they should be adjusted to fit the forms instead. It'd look a whole lot cooler.

I know that pandas are white, but I would really like to see the option of having it on natural, or ash. Other than that, I would make it the full size of the shirt and leave it as is.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/3686/Herders

Definitely. I agree, the design should be huge on the shirt.



A couple people think the design would look better if all the 'panda' were visible, so I'm going to try it out and see how it goes. I kind of wanted them to be cut off, kind of newspaper-like, though.



There are a lot of panda shirts already, I know. They are my favorite animal, though (: What other animals would you all like to see instead? I was thinking of doing a zebra - yes, no? Not a whole lot of zebra shirts around lately, but zebra print is really popular right now.

aw i love this! I'd so buy it :]

I lve the idea and composition, I would say that the "panda" text could be changed to something that gives the design more conceptual depth...the bamboo idea is cool...but graphically it says something, I think the text(or pattern fill) should expound on what it says when you pull back and can't even read it...

I must sound like an ass with all my shitty designs...

i love it bust Saintjasin is right with the conceptual depth

panda panda panda panda (deerhoof)