Suggestions are welcome...

I think you need the title somewhere on the shirt. Also maybe make it look more "dirty" and realistic like they have just been in a fight.

What do you think now?

anyone?

bump

it looks better on blue and i like drawing but i think that slogan is too big :)

I like this textured-look much better than the first version; I really don't think you need the text on there, though. The font really doesn't do anything for the design; maybe if you had a drawing on the back of the shirt, at the bottom, like a guy laid out like he'd just been knocked out? Just a small thing, so he looks far away.

OK. I'll work on this. Thanks!

lose the text bro hammy . i like th3 design the text just doesnt match it its not the same style. nice tho keep going.



SCORE MY DESIGN

I made some changes. I drew the box scene for the back of the tee. This design is presented in blue or heather gray. I'll probably use Flash to make a clear presentation.



What do you think?

I really enjoy the illustration on the back of the tee. It really is a nice addition. Personally, I liked when the gloves didnt have that cracked, dirty look but maybe that's just me.

Thanks. The majority wanted a dirty look. But I'll try it clean again and show a preview. See what is most liked.

I enjoy the dirty look....I am not likeing the back myself...



could I have some help on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34974/Kevin_of_the_Krypt

Don't go back to the glossy look. It didn't look nice.

So more of you like the dirty look. OK.



I'll make the presentation so that you can see both versions on the 2 tee colors. Any more suggestions?

Do you like it front to back, or all on front?

Or maybe even the gloves at back and the illo at front.

Is there a way that it wraps around the side? and could you keep the gloves in the same style as the drawing, I like the worn faded look and I like the spladder but I am not so sure about the glossy mark and how cartoony they look for the drawing.

Should I keep the blood?



I'm going to make a better adaptation of the gloves sketch... so it fits within the bottom illustration style.



Any more comments let me know.

Better?

Sure!

i actually like the design better w/o the pic on the back... check out my submissions and let me know what you think.

That's sick. I liked the gloves in the corner but undoubtably, the glove design is a lot nicer.

I agree with tkomisar.....better without the person on the back.....



hey I updated mine could I get your opinion?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34974/Kevin_of_the_Krypt#v5

The glove design is MUCH better; I wouldn't have known how to tell you how to make it better because I liked the texture. As for the two guys on the back, I'm not sure what to add at this point.

On front only. I put the gloves to the side, since that seemed like the prefer placement from most of you. And since some commented that they didn't like the design on back, and some do... I did a subtle coloring on front to give a continuation of storyline.

anyone?

anyone else?

pretty cool but i would make the gloves more realistic. not photo realistic but just to match the background you know?

Agree with tomjon- if you could get the gloves to fit in more with the bottom drawing it'd be golden. This looks really sweet.



Help me out: http://www.threadless.com/critique/35048/Good_Old_Michigan

I think that it is getting a lot better. can you make the only color the red and the rest be the color of the shirt?

in the last post I forgot to mention make the white on the gloves the color of the lines you are using on the drawing

Based on comments, made corrections.

I actually like it only in heather gray.

I can't seem to find an alternative color for this.

did you try it on blue?

On blue

any suggestions?

love the idea..

just 2 things come to ma mind now..

1- the color of the blue t shirt.. if it was light blue..

2- if the 2 lines of the boxing ring.. continued on the whole front .. maybe also on the back..

and if the boxing gloves were a bit smaller..and one last thing.. if the illustration itself.. had more edge to it.. maybe something like this..



http://images.google.co.uk/imgres?imgurl=http://comics.pascal.free.fr/files%2520page%2520sketches/page%2520sketches_imagemonsters.jpg&imgrefurl=http://comics.pascal.free.fr/page%2520sketches.htm&usg=__x062Ymb_MQdSga-IBKg61T92zDY=&h=710&w=556&sz=74&hl=en&start=2&um=1&tbnid=Bk9h3vSB5x91DM:&tbnh=140&tbnw=110&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsketches%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4GGIH_en-GBBH267BH267%26sa%3DX



another idea. if the whole color scheme (inculding the tee) was mono-color..dunno what's the name of the color.. but "dust-like" color

lool.. that's more than 2 things.. but anyhow.. do ya thing!

bump!

cream?

i think version 3 is the way to go!!

i dunno,I like version 1 the most

mmm i think the ideas from satir are good ideas continue the ring trough all the tee shirt could look cool im not a fan of the gloves but my only suggestion would be that you made it like the way pucca chacarcters are made



whenever you have time please give it a comment

http://www.threadless.com/critique/36431/little_king

Yeah, I'm thinking about solutions for this one.

There are a lot of different opinions, so not sure how to go about with it. I'm open to trying a more neutral one as Satir mentioned. And see how that goes in critique. Thanks for the comments!

still thinking. lordy!

the gloves are looking a bit too cartoony

I think I'll just redraw them

This is a great idea, and the only comment i really have is the gloves but you already addressed that. The shirt color could be changed to. Maybe cream?? Not really sure. Be sure to vote on my design Soul Jamz

bump!

Bump