I've gotten some good feedback in the WIP stage, but I'd like to hear from more folks. I want the subtlety to stick, but I don't want anything to get too lost. Suggestions for a taller, thinner font were made, along with toning down the white to a light blue? Anything else? Discuss.

i really like the style of the shirt but i dont know if the white hands are working that well....over some of the letters they look great but on others (like the "s" and "w") not so much



maybe play around with the colors a bit like using different blues for the hands instead

I changed the white to a much more subtle blue, changed the font, and played with the tracking.

Looks good!

maybe choose a different font for the text but interesting idea