This is the second time I submit this design for critique. The first time i got some comments (thanks to those who commented) but I feel like it still needs work and I would like to see more comments this time around.

I have no clue what the shape is (other than the fire) but it's awesome. A heart? I love how stark and defined it is.

Nice, I'd suggest a more complimentary color shirt, it pops a little too much on the black.

its def. a heart. Pretty cool idea. But yeah, I would actually make it smaller and placed near the heart, and yes...not on black, it makes it pop too much.



Thanks for the comments on mine!

^ no problem! and thanks i will try that.

Ok I shrunk and moved the heart to the left and added some color options!



Round Two!

looks good on brown and blue

Thanks! It was rejected during version 1 is there anything that would cause another rejection?

i think the reason it was declined could be that there are too many different types of fonts. threadless encourages the use of type created by the designer instead of using generic fonts available to lots of people

thanks for the that band-it i will try some personal handwritten stuff!

I was going to say the same thing, you should try doing some hand written fonts.