Let my first design be the message.

nice use of colors and a beautiful message, but something needs to be done to take this to the next level



sorry i don't have specific suggestions

chelly, thanks for comment! I agree this one looks more like mock-up rather than finished print.

I'll make the next version and post here.

A different shirt color, maybe blue...?



And the font looks a lot like LOTR fake elvish font... Especially with Orlando Bloom being in that movie...I don't know if I like it.

Good idea. Blue shirt color was one of last options before choosing current one so I'll try to use it again with updated design.



About font: this one is called "Samarkan". Usually it is described as "psychedelic and retro". I think this due to it's ethnic roots related to psychedelic cultures like GOA. Also is is often used as pseudo-Vedic font; for example, some write "Hare Krishna" using this font (to see it, you can google images for "Samarkan").



Thank you for noticing it resembles the LOTR's look-and-feel. This not only helps me to figure the best solution for the next version of design but also gives one more fun idea for another one :)